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| 981629423 || 2020-10-03T14:11:54Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>wording suggestions of an external content expert, who by the way sees no COI</nowiki>
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| 981628491 || 2020-10-03T14:04:35Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>suggestions of an external content expert reader...nothing substantial, just wordsmithing to improve clarity</nowiki>
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| 981627266 || 2020-10-03T13:55:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>advice of an external expert, to elaborate "air traffic" data</nowiki>
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| 979478623 || 2020-09-21T01:07:22Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Ongoing research and development */ yet another point of view represented</nowiki>
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| 977939280 || 2020-09-11T21:58:01Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Ongoing research and development */ condensed by deleting unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 977937525 || 2020-09-11T21:46:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>condensed by deleting unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 977936692 || 2020-09-11T21:39:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>data is plural, so verb is "data are"</nowiki>
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| 977886673 || 2020-09-11T15:33:00Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Deficiency of color vision can affect symbol salience */ corrected typo</nowiki>
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| 977886374 || 2020-09-11T15:30:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted link to CIE website, and deleted mention of CIE in relation to a report on enhancement of image for viewing by the colorblind; I'm guessing this mitigates COI concerns expressed by editors</nowiki>
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| 977763965 || 2020-09-10T20:50:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Grayscale, an important tool for visualization of data */ snuffing out one last escapee reference to the CIE 2018 report, to avoid COI as judged by AngusWOOF</nowiki>
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| 977701926 || 2020-09-10T12:55:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Grayscale, an important tool for visualization of data */ I think this deleted the last remaining mention of the CIE 2018 technical report on grayscale for self-luminous devices, to avoid even an appearance of COI</nowiki>
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| 977700891 || 2020-09-10T12:44:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Grayscale, an important tool for visualization of data */ more expunging mention of CIE grayscale calculation for self-luminous devices, per AngusWOOF sense of a COI in such mention.</nowiki>
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| 977700502 || 2020-09-10T12:40:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Grayscale, an important tool for visualization of data */ AngusWOOF judges it is a COI to cite the CIE 2018 report on grayscale for self-luminous devices.  I defer to this judgment and eliminate the reference.</nowiki>
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| 977698984 || 2020-09-10T12:24:04Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Promoting final section on R&D to second-order heading; it isn't subordinate to grayscale</nowiki>
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| 977631299 || 2020-09-10T01:07:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>concluding summary of major points removed at request of AngusWOOF</nowiki>
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| 977631009 || 2020-09-10T01:05:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Concise summary removed from header at request of Angus WOOF</nowiki>
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| 977303721 || 2020-09-08T03:06:14Z || AngusWOOF || <nowiki>tag COI</nowiki>
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| 977284991 || 2020-09-08T00:25:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki></nowiki>
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| 977245765 || 2020-09-07T19:14:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unecessary words in the header</nowiki>
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| 977099184 || 2020-09-06T22:58:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Grayscale, an important tool for visualization of data */ reference at the end of the supported sentence.</nowiki>
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| 977053866 || 2020-09-06T17:19:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Legibility in the context of color coding */ change to a more-accurate verb</nowiki>
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| 977052400 || 2020-09-06T17:10:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Choosing salient colors for color coding */ add missing space</nowiki>
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| 977052254 || 2020-09-06T17:09:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Choosing salient colors for color coding */ display's gamut</nowiki>
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| 977052028 || 2020-09-06T17:07:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Choosing salient colors for color coding */ deleted several unnecessarily redundant words</nowiki>
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| 977051524 || 2020-09-06T17:04:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Choosing salient colors for color coding */ Every sentence ought to have a verb!</nowiki>
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| 977051097 || 2020-09-06T17:01:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Time required to find visualized information */ deleted several unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 977050505 || 2020-09-06T16:57:00Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Color-coded visualization */two examples of connecting and untangling with color</nowiki>
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| 977049771 || 2020-09-06T16:51:18Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary word in first paragraph</nowiki>
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| 976887732 || 2020-09-05T17:24:08Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Choosing salient colors for color coding */ deleted unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 976887369 || 2020-09-05T17:21:36Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Choosing salient colors for color coding */ deleted unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 976887069 || 2020-09-05T17:19:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Choosing salient colors for color coding */ clarifying for coherence in paragraph</nowiki>
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| 976886675 || 2020-09-05T17:16:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Choosing salient colors for color coding */ delete unnecessay words</nowiki>
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| 976886460 || 2020-09-05T17:14:50Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Choosing salient colors for color coding */ delete unncessary semicolon</nowiki>
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| 976885791 || 2020-09-05T17:09:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>claification of a comparison</nowiki>
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| 976794091 || 2020-09-05T02:02:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Grayscale, an important tool for visualization of data */ deleted unnecessary spacing</nowiki>
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| 976793878 || 2020-09-05T02:00:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Grayscale, an important tool for visualization of data */ deleted redundant sentence</nowiki>
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| 976793318 || 2020-09-05T01:54:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Grayscale, an important tool for visualization of data */ clearer placement of reference</nowiki>
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| 976793119 || 2020-09-05T01:52:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted redundant sentence</nowiki>
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| 976791779 || 2020-09-05T01:39:18Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unecessary word and letters</nowiki>
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| 976740516 || 2020-09-04T18:23:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 976739687 || 2020-09-04T18:17:04Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>better word order and fewer words</nowiki>
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| 976739219 || 2020-09-04T18:13:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 976738929 || 2020-09-04T18:11:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted errant space</nowiki>
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| 976738732 || 2020-09-04T18:09:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary letter</nowiki>
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| 976731040 || 2020-09-04T17:15:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>first sentence of last paragraph, in fewer words.</nowiki>
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| 976730091 || 2020-09-04T17:10:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>name tristimulus values: (X,Y,Z)</nowiki>
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| 976729326 || 2020-09-04T17:06:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added link to Wikipedia article on gamut</nowiki>
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| 976625385 || 2020-09-04T01:42:35Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>delete redundant word</nowiki>
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| 976625081 || 2020-09-04T01:39:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>far becomes remote</nowiki>
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| 976624624 || 2020-09-04T01:35:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary word</nowiki>
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| 976624301 || 2020-09-04T01:32:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link to Wikipedia article for confidence interval</nowiki>
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| 976623864 || 2020-09-04T01:29:09Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link to Wikipedia article for confidence interval</nowiki>
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| 976623652 || 2020-09-04T01:27:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link to Wikipedia article for confidence interval</nowiki>
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| 976623430 || 2020-09-04T01:25:35Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link to Wikipedia article for confidence interval</nowiki>
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| 976623263 || 2020-09-04T01:24:08Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link to Wikipedia article for confidence interval</nowiki>
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| 976622022 || 2020-09-04T01:12:24Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>clarifying adjective added</nowiki>
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| 976047208 || 2020-08-31T22:01:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>aligning textbook references with mention of their emphases</nowiki>
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| 976046784 || 2020-08-31T21:57:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted a sentence and unecessary words</nowiki>
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| 976046158 || 2020-08-31T21:52:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Unnecessary words deleted</nowiki>
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| 976045479 || 2020-08-31T21:46:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>better word order</nowiki>
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| 976045161 || 2020-08-31T21:43:16Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>strategic deployment of commas</nowiki>
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| 975891814 || 2020-08-31T00:34:02Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Ongoing research and development */  moving adjective "industrial" to where it would be clearest</nowiki>
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| 975891613 || 2020-08-31T00:31:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted a metaphor, consistent with editor guidance</nowiki>
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| 975891501 || 2020-08-31T00:30:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Keeping order of summary items consistent with order of presentation in text</nowiki>
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| 975889701 || 2020-08-31T00:14:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>maybe "powerfully" is hyperbolic, and editors said to delete hyperbole</nowiki>
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| 975889554 || 2020-08-31T00:12:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary words at begining of section on grayscale</nowiki>
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| 975889292 || 2020-08-31T00:10:15Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Clarifying the genesis of Figure 5.</nowiki>
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| 975883602 || 2020-08-30T23:18:02Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>clarifying wording</nowiki>
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| 975882809 || 2020-08-30T23:10:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>placing reference with supported fact</nowiki>
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| 975882678 || 2020-08-30T23:08:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>trying semicolon in first sentence of section on choosing colors</nowiki>
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| 975882455 || 2020-08-30T23:06:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>clarifying first sentence of section on choosing colors</nowiki>
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| 975882102 || 2020-08-30T23:03:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>formatting</nowiki>
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| 975881870 || 2020-08-30T23:01:28Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Relocated two sentences for better coherence.</nowiki>
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| 975880989 || 2020-08-30T22:53:22Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>unnecessary sentence deleted from third paragraph</nowiki>
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| 975880336 || 2020-08-30T22:46:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>corrected misspelling</nowiki>
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| 975880012 || 2020-08-30T22:43:09Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>parentheses deleted in third paragraph</nowiki>
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| 975879539 || 2020-08-30T22:39:08Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted more words from the first paragraph</nowiki>
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| 975879363 || 2020-08-30T22:37:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted words from first paragraph</nowiki>
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| 975878972 || 2020-08-30T22:34:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary words and an metaphor from first paragraph</nowiki>
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| 975807509 || 2020-08-30T14:51:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added ref for research</nowiki>
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| 975714079 || 2020-08-30T01:04:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>terminal "and" in list</nowiki>
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| 975713881 || 2020-08-30T01:02:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Better word choice</nowiki>
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| 975713575 || 2020-08-30T00:59:18Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More precise wording in opening paragraph</nowiki>
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| 975658234 || 2020-08-29T18:40:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link for color medical images</nowiki>
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| 975656729 || 2020-08-29T18:31:01Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improvements to Header</nowiki>
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| 975656052 || 2020-08-29T18:26:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary words in second paragraph</nowiki>
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| 975655224 || 2020-08-29T18:22:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary words in R&D paragraph</nowiki>
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| 975654675 || 2020-08-29T18:19:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improvements to R&D paragraph</nowiki>
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| 975652456 || 2020-08-29T18:07:28Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>reuse of existing references to support statements in R&D paragraph</nowiki>
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| 975651671 || 2020-08-29T18:02:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Two more references about related R&D</nowiki>
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| 975523743 || 2020-08-29T00:47:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Making it clearer that Wandell and Brainard are an R&D team</nowiki>
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| 975523326 || 2020-08-29T00:44:18Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>spelling correction and more removal of hyperbole</nowiki>
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| 975522826 || 2020-08-29T00:39:50Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>removing words possibly construed as hyperbolic</nowiki>
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| 975348761 || 2020-08-28T00:57:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added reference for R&D</nowiki>
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| 975251254 || 2020-08-27T16:25:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>reference for Wandell and Brainard's recent research</nowiki>
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| 975091585 || 2020-08-26T18:04:43Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Yet another kind of R&D that is germane; an online seminar I saw today</nowiki>
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| 975052612 || 2020-08-26T13:14:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>correctly spelling aeronautical</nowiki>
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| 975052368 || 2020-08-26T13:12:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>used ref for few items of target color</nowiki>
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| 975051582 || 2020-08-26T13:05:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added a reference</nowiki>
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| 974940122 || 2020-08-25T22:19:00Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"unique" might be construed as hyperbolic (which the editor said to expunge), so it is changed to "unusual"</nowiki>
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| 974937787 || 2020-08-25T22:07:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted a metaphorical sentence; editor said remove metaphor.</nowiki>
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| 974934634 || 2020-08-25T21:52:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>editor says get rid of hyperbole, so out with "seminal" to describe Bertin's book</nowiki>
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| 974915607 || 2020-08-25T19:49:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>explicit list of tributaries of color-coded visualization</nowiki>
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| 974890286 || 2020-08-25T16:37:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted an unnecessary sentence in the final paragraph, and deleted a negation</nowiki>
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| 974787599 || 2020-08-25T01:13:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleting unnecessary words in final paragraph</nowiki>
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| 974787445 || 2020-08-25T01:11:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>avoid repeating "interest" in same (final) paragraph;  substituting "concern" once.</nowiki>
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| 974786877 || 2020-08-25T01:05:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>avoid repeat of same word twice in same paragraph: contemporary</nowiki>
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| 974786532 || 2020-08-25T01:01:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary letters</nowiki>
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| 974743342 || 2020-08-24T19:14:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Including mention of research by Ming Ronnier Luo</nowiki>
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| 974742688 || 2020-08-24T19:10:01Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Relating the last paragraph to the first; a nice touch</nowiki>
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| 974740935 || 2020-08-24T18:56:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixed excessive capitalization in final two seciton headings</nowiki>
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| 974740320 || 2020-08-24T18:52:00Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>combined two sentences to eliminate redundant words</nowiki>
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| 974739145 || 2020-08-24T18:43:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>moved link for NASA color tool, to earlier first mention of idea of device-independent color cooordinates</nowiki>
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| 974738328 || 2020-08-24T18:36:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 974737950 || 2020-08-24T18:33:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>hyphenated adjective color-coding</nowiki>
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| 974737333 || 2020-08-24T18:28:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>improved placement of citation</nowiki>
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| 974736290 || 2020-08-24T18:21:43Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added adjective "ongoing" for R&D, so readers know this is contemporary</nowiki>
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| 974735825 || 2020-08-24T18:18:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>interchanging ultimate and penultimate paragraphs in head, for better flow</nowiki>
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| 974735434 || 2020-08-24T18:16:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>hypenating color-coded, an adjective in first sentence</nowiki>
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| 974696852 || 2020-08-24T13:37:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary sentence</nowiki>
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| 974696117 || 2020-08-24T13:30:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Moved a sentence between paragraphs for better coherence</nowiki>
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| 974627217 || 2020-08-24T02:23:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>R&D paragraph mentioned in Lead</nowiki>
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| 974626750 || 2020-08-24T02:19:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>verb tense in opening paragraph</nowiki>
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| 974626316 || 2020-08-24T02:16:04Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Link to Brian Wandell</nowiki>
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| 974625872 || 2020-08-24T02:11:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More improvements to final paragraph, R&D</nowiki>
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| 974625183 || 2020-08-24T02:04:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>One more time; right level of indent for Conclusions</nowiki>
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| 974624972 || 2020-08-24T02:02:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More space between Fig 8/9 and Conclusions</nowiki>
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| 974624769 || 2020-08-24T02:00:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Getting the indent level right for Conslusions</nowiki>
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| 974624481 || 2020-08-24T01:58:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improvements to R&D paragraph</nowiki>
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| 974623245 || 2020-08-24T01:45:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Completed adding references ofr R&D, and moved R&D to end of Conclusions</nowiki>
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| 974622046 || 2020-08-24T01:34:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added one of the references for R&D</nowiki>
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| 974621657 || 2020-08-24T01:31:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>An editor suggested and R&D section</nowiki>
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| 974551823 || 2020-08-23T17:31:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>lower case s on Saccade, and idea that saccades are subconscious</nowiki>
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| 974551218 || 2020-08-23T17:27:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added idea that saccades are involuntary</nowiki>
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| 974550531 || 2020-08-23T17:23:58Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary sentence</nowiki>
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| 974548373 || 2020-08-23T17:12:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>change to imporve clarity</nowiki>
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| 974547093 || 2020-08-23T17:05:38Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>consistency of verb tense</nowiki>
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| 974546679 || 2020-08-23T17:03:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added missing idea that FAA air-traffic controller displays are color displays</nowiki>
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| 974546393 || 2020-08-23T17:01:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>adding important idea of dynamism in visualizing data that change</nowiki>
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| 974545605 || 2020-08-23T16:57:04Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improved title of final section</nowiki>
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| 974545007 || 2020-08-23T16:53:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted word made unnecessary by better word order</nowiki>
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| 974544225 || 2020-08-23T16:49:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary word</nowiki>
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| 974544080 || 2020-08-23T16:48:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>coding becomes coded in first sentence; readers will understand "origins of" nouns better than verbs</nowiki>
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| 974543692 || 2020-08-23T16:45:54Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>revised wording in second paragraph to better reflect revised order of presentation</nowiki>
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| 974542536 || 2020-08-23T16:38:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary word, "The" at beginning of article</nowiki>
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| 974542131 || 2020-08-23T16:35:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>better wording in second paragraph</nowiki>
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| 974541411 || 2020-08-23T16:30:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>spelling big_data</nowiki>
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| 974541231 || 2020-08-23T16:29:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>revised intro paragraph sentence about info tech</nowiki>
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| 974540586 || 2020-08-23T16:25:15Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary reference</nowiki>
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| 974538072 || 2020-08-23T16:09:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>fixing link to rubric</nowiki>
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| 974537766 || 2020-08-23T16:07:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>fixing link to Jacques Bertin</nowiki>
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| 974537353 || 2020-08-23T16:05:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link to Jacques Bertin</nowiki>
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| 974536700 || 2020-08-23T16:01:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>capitalize Four Color Theorem, a proper name</nowiki>
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| 974530802 || 2020-08-23T15:26:50Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixing a link</nowiki>
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| 974530456 || 2020-08-23T15:24:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More history, as suggested by Wikipedia editors</nowiki>
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| 974446196 || 2020-08-23T02:55:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>delete founded; advocates of Jacques Bertin would object to that verb</nowiki>
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| 974445381 || 2020-08-23T02:47:18Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>claim about founders of data visualization</nowiki>
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| 974400489 || 2020-08-22T20:06:16Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Add word "summary" to final section heading for clarity</nowiki>
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| 974399242 || 2020-08-22T19:57:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>swap order of two words to enhance clarity</nowiki>
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| 974398758 || 2020-08-22T19:54:02Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>add a colon to signify a list</nowiki>
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| 974398478 || 2020-08-22T19:52:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>delete unnecessary word</nowiki>
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| 974398268 || 2020-08-22T19:50:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>edit for clarity</nowiki>
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| 974397541 || 2020-08-22T19:44:54Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Reordering summary to go with promotion of applications closer to lead</nowiki>
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| 974396897 || 2020-08-22T19:39:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Moving applications closer to lead, on advice of an expert friend, and consistent with Wiki editors' suggestions</nowiki>
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| 974361382 || 2020-08-22T15:12:58Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>follows changed to has, for statistical distribution</nowiki>
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| 974360574 || 2020-08-22T15:07:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>changed wording to focus on modern display technology</nowiki>
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| 974360190 || 2020-08-22T15:04:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"color-coded" added to modify data visualization</nowiki>
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| 974359783 || 2020-08-22T15:01:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>add "contemporary" to blend with historic them of the paragraph</nowiki>
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| 974359432 || 2020-08-22T14:58:23Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>add "finally" to indicate last of four items</nowiki>
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| 974358898 || 2020-08-22T14:55:23Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"data" modifying visualization in title</nowiki>
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| 974226469 || 2020-08-21T19:57:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"greater" for "higher"</nowiki>
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| 974226278 || 2020-08-21T19:56:35Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>delete personal pronoun "you" and unecessary words</nowiki>
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| 974225764 || 2020-08-21T19:52:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>uniform spelling of grayscale</nowiki>
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| 974225085 || 2020-08-21T19:47:43Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 974223755 || 2020-08-21T19:37:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>citation added for factual statement</nowiki>
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| 974223170 || 2020-08-21T19:32:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>semicolon should be comma</nowiki>
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| 974222902 || 2020-08-21T19:31:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>eliminated personal pronoun "we"</nowiki>
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| 974222180 || 2020-08-21T19:26:09Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>better wording for coherence</nowiki>
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| 974221402 || 2020-08-21T19:21:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>important idea, sentence added</nowiki>
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| 974220648 || 2020-08-21T19:15:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 974219581 || 2020-08-21T19:08:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>better heading</nowiki>
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| 974219404 || 2020-08-21T19:06:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>unecessary capitalization</nowiki>
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| 974218984 || 2020-08-21T19:02:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted repeated word, not necessary both times</nowiki>
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| 974218511 || 2020-08-21T18:59:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improvement to clarity and coherence of second paragraph</nowiki>
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| 974217759 || 2020-08-21T18:53:15Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>more-concrete "visualizations" substituted for "applications"</nowiki>
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| 974217465 || 2020-08-21T18:51:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Adjective to indicate examples are not exhaustive of possibilities</nowiki>
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| 974217270 || 2020-08-21T18:49:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>spelling: missing letter</nowiki>
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| 974216925 || 2020-08-21T18:47:01Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>lower case where necessary</nowiki>
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| 974154613 || 2020-08-21T10:58:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"you" gone</nowiki>
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| 974064300 || 2020-08-20T21:53:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 974063614 || 2020-08-20T21:48:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted personal pronoun "your"</nowiki>
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| 974062815 || 2020-08-20T21:42:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Period before citation if citation is for whole sentence.</nowiki>
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| 974061915 || 2020-08-20T21:36:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Eliminated personal pronoun, you</nowiki>
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| 974027225 || 2020-08-20T17:36:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More consistency of number</nowiki>
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| 974026825 || 2020-08-20T17:33:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>consistency of number: noun and verb.</nowiki>
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| 974026316 || 2020-08-20T17:28:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>removing prescriptiveness and excess words</nowiki>
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| 974026091 || 2020-08-20T17:27:24Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>removed "recommended" as too prescriptive</nowiki>
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| 974025823 || 2020-08-20T17:25:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>various changes for clarity and coherence</nowiki>
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| 974024049 || 2020-08-20T17:11:21Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Unnecessary words deleted</nowiki>
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| 974023788 || 2020-08-20T17:09:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improvements to new second paragraph</nowiki>
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| 974022565 || 2020-08-20T17:02:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"The" needed</nowiki>
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| 973993722 || 2020-08-20T13:21:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"others" is a better word than "academics"</nowiki>
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| 973993519 || 2020-08-20T13:19:54Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary word</nowiki>
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| 973993211 || 2020-08-20T13:17:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>References for facts in lead, plus renaming summary</nowiki>
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| 973991759 || 2020-08-20T13:04:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>FINAL PAGE ADDED TO reference</nowiki>
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| 973904687 || 2020-08-19T22:32:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added citation</nowiki>
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| 973890458 || 2020-08-19T20:39:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added refrerence for a fact</nowiki>
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| 973889399 || 2020-08-19T20:32:01Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Correcting incorrect reference for a fact</nowiki>
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| 973888394 || 2020-08-19T20:25:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Getting the right reference for each fact</nowiki>
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| 973887495 || 2020-08-19T20:21:01Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Corrected error in reference number</nowiki>
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| 973886570 || 2020-08-19T20:14:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added a missing application of color optimization</nowiki>
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| 973885776 || 2020-08-19T20:09:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added reference for a technical assertion</nowiki>
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| 973884775 || 2020-08-19T20:02:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Reordering sentences to enhance coherence</nowiki>
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| 973884216 || 2020-08-19T19:59:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Removed unnecessary words from caption of Figure 3</nowiki>
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| 973883400 || 2020-08-19T19:54:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted redundant words</nowiki>
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| 973883144 || 2020-08-19T19:52:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added mention of process flow charts</nowiki>
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| 973882714 || 2020-08-19T19:50:01Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>indefinite pronoun "that" clarified</nowiki>
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| 973881436 || 2020-08-19T19:42:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Order of sentences revised in second paragraph</nowiki>
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| 973864412 || 2020-08-19T17:42:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"symbols" substituted for "data"</nowiki>
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| 973831159 || 2020-08-19T13:26:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Important reference added</nowiki>
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| 973829457 || 2020-08-19T13:12:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>two citations on a sentence converted to one citation on each of two sentences</nowiki>
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| 973827919 || 2020-08-19T12:58:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Getting rid of prescriptive language; Wikipedia is descriptive</nowiki>
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| 973825759 || 2020-08-19T12:36:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>avoid repeating the same word</nowiki>
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| 973825453 || 2020-08-19T12:33:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>delete "impressive"</nowiki>
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| 973753702 || 2020-08-19T01:45:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Clarifying contemporary practice of data visualization</nowiki>
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| 973752567 || 2020-08-19T01:34:54Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Space before summary</nowiki>
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| 973752395 || 2020-08-19T01:33:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Completed summary</nowiki>
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| 973714347 || 2020-08-18T20:21:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Trying a summary section</nowiki>
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| 973712150 || 2020-08-18T20:04:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>removing conflict in lead</nowiki>
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| 973711556 || 2020-08-18T19:59:28Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link to data visualization in the lead</nowiki>
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| 973710862 || 2020-08-18T19:53:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Further improvements to lead</nowiki>
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| 973710038 || 2020-08-18T19:47:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary word in lead</nowiki>
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| 973709620 || 2020-08-18T19:44:22Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>better wording in lead</nowiki>
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| 973709412 || 2020-08-18T19:42:50Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More improvements to the Lead</nowiki>
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| 973707544 || 2020-08-18T19:28:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Header should summarize the article's contents</nowiki>
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| 973691227 || 2020-08-18T17:34:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fine tuning position of Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 973690700 || 2020-08-18T17:32:43Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Repositioning Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 973689327 || 2020-08-18T17:23:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>reference added for a stated fact</nowiki>
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| 973688613 || 2020-08-18T17:18:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>word choice: pre-established for particular</nowiki>
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| 973688208 || 2020-08-18T17:15:02Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>word choice: salience for detection</nowiki>
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| 973687889 || 2020-08-18T17:12:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Clarified that tristimulus values are used to calculate color difference</nowiki>
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| 973687299 || 2020-08-18T17:07:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>clarifying adjective added</nowiki>
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| 973687017 || 2020-08-18T17:05:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>word choice, salient for distinct</nowiki>
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| 973686668 || 2020-08-18T17:02:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Eliminated unecessary sentence</nowiki>
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| 973686298 || 2020-08-18T17:00:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>citation added for stated fact</nowiki>
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| 973685982 || 2020-08-18T16:57:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 973685697 || 2020-08-18T16:55:28Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary words</nowiki>
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| 973685230 || 2020-08-18T16:51:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>prepositions: in for with</nowiki>
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| 973684970 || 2020-08-18T16:50:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>spelling technologies</nowiki>
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| 973684499 || 2020-08-18T16:46:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another look a the opening paragraph</nowiki>
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| 973360057 || 2020-08-16T19:59:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>second try using wizard for link to Wikipedia article on big data</nowiki>
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| 973359623 || 2020-08-16T19:57:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link to wikipedia article on big data</nowiki>
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| 973358323 || 2020-08-16T19:48:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Moved a sentence on technical guidelines</nowiki>
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| 973357360 || 2020-08-16T19:41:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Reorder of ideas in second paragraph to correspond to new order in article.</nowiki>
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| 973356465 || 2020-08-16T19:36:18Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added adjective electronic to modify displays</nowiki>
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| 973356141 || 2020-08-16T19:34:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>capital C demoted to lower case</nowiki>
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| 973355447 || 2020-08-16T19:29:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Trying-out a different location for the section on applications</nowiki>
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| 973353291 || 2020-08-16T19:18:43Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>spacing for references after Figure 9</nowiki>
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| 973351657 || 2020-08-16T19:08:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Moving the reference on motion, flash coding</nowiki>
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| 973350108 || 2020-08-16T18:58:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More work on opening paragraph</nowiki>
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| 973348264 || 2020-08-16T18:45:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Word-smithing first paragraph</nowiki>
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| 973348056 || 2020-08-16T18:44:24Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Titivating first paragraph</nowiki>
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| 973347362 || 2020-08-16T18:39:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted errant ) and the final paragraph as suggested by editors</nowiki>
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| 973346281 || 2020-08-16T18:33:01Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added references for new historical introductory paragraph</nowiki>
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| 973302238 || 2020-08-16T13:41:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added up-front history and orientation; just a draft to be improved later e.g., with citations</nowiki>
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| 972557110 || 2020-08-12T18:03:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Two more highlights converted to italics</nowiki>
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| 972556447 || 2020-08-12T17:59:58Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"highlighting guidelines not appropriate", so they are converted to italics</nowiki>
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| 972335341 || 2020-08-11T13:59:16Z || AngusWOOF || <nowiki>Declining submission: essay - Submission reads like an essay ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1)</nowiki>
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| 972330529 || 2020-08-11T13:28:16Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki></nowiki>
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| 972329848 || 2020-08-11T13:23:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted an unnecessary sentence from the final paragraph</nowiki>
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| 972329289 || 2020-08-11T13:19:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary words in final paragraph</nowiki>
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| 972328774 || 2020-08-11T13:16:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Rearranging order of sentences in final paragraph</nowiki>
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| 972327834 || 2020-08-11T13:09:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improvements to final paragraph</nowiki>
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| 972325555 || 2020-08-11T12:55:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Space should have been before section on info-display context of color coding</nowiki>
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| 972325307 || 2020-08-11T12:53:21Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Additional space inserted after figure 5</nowiki>
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| 972324404 || 2020-08-11T12:46:50Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Contrast calibration cited in paragraph about contrast, for coherence</nowiki>
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| 972249272 || 2020-08-11T02:03:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>putting luminance calibration in grayscale section</nowiki>
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| 972248701 || 2020-08-11T01:59:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Editors asked for seven paragraphs; this edit makes seven major sections in the article</nowiki>
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| 972247749 || 2020-08-11T01:52:22Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>uniform spelling of "grayscale"</nowiki>
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| 972246858 || 2020-08-11T01:45:24Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>correcting misconception re gamut</nowiki>
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| 972245924 || 2020-08-11T01:38:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Combining paragraphs for coherence</nowiki>
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| 972196535 || 2020-08-10T18:46:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Condensed by deleting a redundant sentence</nowiki>
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| 972195925 || 2020-08-10T18:41:36Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary letters</nowiki>
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| 972194439 || 2020-08-10T18:29:52Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>fact needed a supporting reference</nowiki>
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| 972192049 || 2020-08-10T18:11:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Indefinite pronoun "these" substituted by definite noun</nowiki>
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| 972191565 || 2020-08-10T18:08:04Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Trying a different sentence order for improved coherence</nowiki>
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| 972191261 || 2020-08-10T18:05:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"and" added for last item in a list</nowiki>
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| 972059306 || 2020-08-09T23:22:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improved caption for Figure 7</nowiki>
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| 972059120 || 2020-08-09T23:20:38Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Making Figure 7 smaller, and condensing by deleting a phrase</nowiki>
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| 972058823 || 2020-08-09T23:17:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Identifying the caption of Figure 7</nowiki>
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| 972058566 || 2020-08-09T23:15:23Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Caption for Figure 7</nowiki>
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| 972057943 || 2020-08-09T23:09:23Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>A sentence deleted to condense</nowiki>
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| 972057572 || 2020-08-09T23:05:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted another sentence</nowiki>
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| 972057268 || 2020-08-09T23:01:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>clarifying</nowiki>
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| 972056882 || 2020-08-09T22:58:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Condensed by eliminating a paragraph and a reference</nowiki>
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| 971842356 || 2020-08-08T15:34:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Same idea better expressed with fewer words and no personal reference</nowiki>
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| 971841812 || 2020-08-08T15:29:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary sentence</nowiki>
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| 971841383 || 2020-08-08T15:25:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another unnecessary sentence gone</nowiki>
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| 971841045 || 2020-08-08T15:22:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>s added for plural, luminances</nowiki>
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| 971840828 || 2020-08-08T15:20:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary sentences</nowiki>
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| 971836976 || 2020-08-08T14:48:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted a personal pronoun</nowiki>
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| 971836730 || 2020-08-08T14:46:36Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Unnecessary sentences deleted</nowiki>
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| 971835988 || 2020-08-08T14:40:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>moved two sentences for better coherence</nowiki>
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| 971835435 || 2020-08-08T14:35:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Eliminated redundant word use.</nowiki>
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| 971834934 || 2020-08-08T14:31:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted an unnecessary sentence</nowiki>
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| 971833824 || 2020-08-08T14:28:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted unnecessary letters</nowiki>
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| 971833238 || 2020-08-08T14:23:01Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Took the "s" off examples in Examples of color coding...</nowiki>
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| 970861669 || 2020-08-02T21:00:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another double citation singled up</nowiki>
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| 970860212 || 2020-08-02T20:50:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>"is" to "can be"</nowiki>
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| 970859570 || 2020-08-02T20:46:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Emphasizing the visualization opportunities and problems of self-luminous displays</nowiki>
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| 970845623 || 2020-08-02T19:12:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More policing the spelling of grayscale</nowiki>
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| 970844522 || 2020-08-02T19:05:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Uniform spelling of grayscale</nowiki>
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| 970843757 || 2020-08-02T18:59:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>rework sentence about NASA color tool</nowiki>
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| 970843194 || 2020-08-02T18:56:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Reworking intro sentence of closing paragraph.</nowiki>
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| 970840123 || 2020-08-02T18:35:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Moving the NASA color chooser to a more appropriate spot</nowiki>
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| 970831173 || 2020-08-02T17:41:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>An attempt to clarify discussion of Figure 2</nowiki>
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| 970828470 || 2020-08-02T17:22:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Invert phrase order to clarity</nowiki>
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| 970827814 || 2020-08-02T17:17:09Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>removed a too-fancy word</nowiki>
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| 970727854 || 2020-08-02T01:19:00Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Period at end of sentence</nowiki>
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| 970727653 || 2020-08-02T01:17:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Explaining that the two references represent two criteria of color similarity.</nowiki>
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| 970726747 || 2020-08-02T01:12:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More technically correct</nowiki>
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| 970726151 || 2020-08-02T01:08:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Double citation turned to single</nowiki>
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| 970725819 || 2020-08-02T01:06:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Putting the period in the right place</nowiki>
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| 970725579 || 2020-08-02T01:05:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>A sentence missed its period.</nowiki>
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| 970713391 || 2020-08-01T23:24:58Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>One less double citation</nowiki>
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| 970713068 || 2020-08-01T23:21:24Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Got rid of another double citation</nowiki>
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| 970712524 || 2020-08-01T23:15:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Whoops, left out /> at end of reference</nowiki>
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| 970712345 || 2020-08-01T23:13:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Provided citations for two little-known facts</nowiki>
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| 970711654 || 2020-08-01T23:07:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>double reference made into two more-specific single references</nowiki>
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| 970711364 || 2020-08-01T23:04:24Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>another double reference bites the dust!</nowiki>
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| 970710754 || 2020-08-01T23:00:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>singling some double citations</nowiki>
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| 970684896 || 2020-08-01T20:02:22Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>another double citation gone</nowiki>
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| 970684395 || 2020-08-01T19:58:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>eliminated another double citation</nowiki>
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| 970683627 || 2020-08-01T19:52:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Two double citation made single</nowiki>
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| 970682759 || 2020-08-01T19:47:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Double-citation eliminated</nowiki>
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| 970681519 || 2020-08-01T19:40:01Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Double citation made single</nowiki>
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| 970680571 || 2020-08-01T19:34:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another double citation made single</nowiki>
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| 970679849 || 2020-08-01T19:31:00Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>two double citations made into singles</nowiki>
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| 970549793 || 2020-07-31T23:50:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Explanation given for the only three-reference citation in the piece.  The sentence refers readers to textbooks and three are cited.</nowiki>
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| 970549232 || 2020-07-31T23:44:04Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>One fewer three-reference citation</nowiki>
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| 970548441 || 2020-07-31T23:35:35Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Got rid of another triple citation</nowiki>
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| 970547879 || 2020-07-31T23:29:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>missing [</nowiki>
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| 970547778 || 2020-07-31T23:28:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>itemizing the link to Road Coloring Theorem</nowiki>
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| 970547522 || 2020-07-31T23:25:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Eliminated three citations for one idea by making it three ideas</nowiki>
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| 970546966 || 2020-07-31T23:20:15Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>clarifying adjective</nowiki>
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| 970546795 || 2020-07-31T23:18:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>errant period deleted</nowiki>
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| 970546653 || 2020-07-31T23:16:52Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>particular instances for three citations, not three for one idea.</nowiki>
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| 970546045 || 2020-07-31T23:10:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>three references become one</nowiki>
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| 970535189 || 2020-07-31T21:51:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Reducing number of multiple citations</nowiki>
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| 970534063 || 2020-07-31T21:42:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Got rid of remaining three-reference citations</nowiki>
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| 970533154 || 2020-07-31T21:35:50Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>one less unnecessary reference</nowiki>
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| 970532521 || 2020-07-31T21:30:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More personal pronouns deleted</nowiki>
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| 970532021 || 2020-07-31T21:26:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>avoid repetitive word</nowiki>
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| 970529088 || 2020-07-31T20:59:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another "we" gone</nowiki>
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| 970528876 || 2020-07-31T20:57:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another "our" gone</nowiki>
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| 970528701 || 2020-07-31T20:55:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Getting rid of personal pronouns: we, our...</nowiki>
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| 970526985 || 2020-07-31T20:41:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Figure 6 caption under figure 6</nowiki>
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| 970499640 || 2020-07-31T17:11:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Sentences deleted, more condensation</nowiki>
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| 970498706 || 2020-07-31T17:05:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Sentences deleted, more condensation</nowiki>
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| 970496998 || 2020-07-31T16:53:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>clarifying cells are on the retina</nowiki>
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| 970496705 || 2020-07-31T16:51:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Saying the same thing with one less word: condensing the article</nowiki>
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| 970495808 || 2020-07-31T16:44:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Avoid negatives, to facilitate comprehensibility.</nowiki>
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| 970349235 || 2020-07-30T19:46:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improved caption of Figure 7</nowiki>
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| 970348593 || 2020-07-30T19:42:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Clarifying text about Figure 9</nowiki>
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| 970347903 || 2020-07-30T19:38:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another lnk to luminance Wikipedia article</nowiki>
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| 970347243 || 2020-07-30T19:33:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added a link to the Wikipedia page on luminance</nowiki>
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| 970346164 || 2020-07-30T19:26:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Substitutig non-technical language where possible</nowiki>
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| 970345053 || 2020-07-30T19:19:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Substituted non-technical language for technical where possible</nowiki>
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| 970344735 || 2020-07-30T19:17:15Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary words: condensation</nowiki>
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| 970343365 || 2020-07-30T19:08:24Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Condensed summary paragraph</nowiki>
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| 970299613 || 2020-07-30T13:52:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted two of three references for one fact.</nowiki>
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| 970298990 || 2020-07-30T13:48:00Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted six letters: condensing</nowiki>
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| 970298647 || 2020-07-30T13:45:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another pass at clarifying Figure 8's caption</nowiki>
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| 970298416 || 2020-07-30T13:44:16Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Figure 8 caption clarified</nowiki>
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| 970297222 || 2020-07-30T13:36:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted parenthetical phrase: more condensing</nowiki>
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| 970296631 || 2020-07-30T13:32:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>one word substituted for two: condensing</nowiki>
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| 970295713 || 2020-07-30T13:25:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unnecessary comma</nowiki>
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| 970294035 || 2020-07-30T13:13:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Depersonalizing, deleted "we"</nowiki>
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| 970293083 || 2020-07-30T13:06:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Figrure 2 caption condensed to two sentences</nowiki>
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| 970292180 || 2020-07-30T13:01:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Theme of electronic displays made explicit</nowiki>
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| 970291530 || 2020-07-30T12:56:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Putting sentences with the same topic nto the same paragraph</nowiki>
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| 970290642 || 2020-07-30T12:49:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>wielding a hyphen</nowiki>
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| 970192265 || 2020-07-29T20:29:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Explicit reference to Figure 7 depicting the CIE calculation</nowiki>
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| 970191787 || 2020-07-29T20:25:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Puting the link for lightness constancy with the first mention</nowiki>
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| 970191322 || 2020-07-29T20:22:18Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Same topic, same paragraph!</nowiki>
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| 970189768 || 2020-07-29T20:10:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Puting back the previously-deleted space after Figs 7 and 8; it was one too many deleted</nowiki>
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| 970189527 || 2020-07-29T20:09:02Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleting one more space after Figures 7 and 8</nowiki>
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| 970189299 || 2020-07-29T20:07:36Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Delete excess space</nowiki>
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| 970188804 || 2020-07-29T20:04:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Condensed caption of Figure 8</nowiki>
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| 970187660 || 2020-07-29T19:56:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Condensed by deleting redundant sentence, and put order of figures in order of mention in text</nowiki>
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| 970186288 || 2020-07-29T19:46:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>new topic, new paragraph</nowiki>
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| 970185545 || 2020-07-29T19:40:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>add parenthetical (slope) to clarify meaning of derivative for non-calculus people, in addtion to link in previous sentence to Wikipedia page about derivatives.</nowiki>
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| 970184788 || 2020-07-29T19:35:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>word choice, to not restrict color coding to search</nowiki>
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| 970183749 || 2020-07-29T19:26:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Flow improvement in discussion of effects of small visual subtense</nowiki>
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| 970183110 || 2020-07-29T19:22:08Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>paring unnecessary punctuation and words</nowiki>
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| 970182454 || 2020-07-29T19:17:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>condensing and clarifying</nowiki>
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| 970180569 || 2020-07-29T19:02:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Reducing number of citations per sentence</nowiki>
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| 970166188 || 2020-07-29T17:10:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Making early paragraph cleared</nowiki>
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| 970165904 || 2020-07-29T17:07:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Unnecessary letter, now gone</nowiki>
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| 970165719 || 2020-07-29T17:06:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted two unnecessary sentences</nowiki>
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| 970119889 || 2020-07-29T11:14:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Reduced size of Figure 5, reduced number of citations for same sentence, moved sentences to improve coherence</nowiki>
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| 970005203 || 2020-07-28T17:38:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Paring a dead URL</nowiki>
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| 970004587 || 2020-07-28T17:34:23Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>removed a URL that doesn't connect</nowiki>
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| 970003560 || 2020-07-28T17:27:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Swaped paragraph order for better flow</nowiki>
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| 970002448 || 2020-07-28T17:19:35Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted two unnecessary sentences</nowiki>
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| 970001730 || 2020-07-28T17:14:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Moving paragraphs for better flow in section on grayscale</nowiki>
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| 970000928 || 2020-07-28T17:09:58Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Clarifying text in Grayscale section</nowiki>
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| 969998096 || 2020-07-28T16:49:16Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Reduced triple references for one sentence.</nowiki>
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| 969997181 || 2020-07-28T16:42:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added citation for erratum related to one of the cited articles</nowiki>
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| 969995516 || 2020-07-28T16:30:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>word choice: quantified rather than described by CIE gray scale formula</nowiki>
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| 969994589 || 2020-07-28T16:23:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted redundant sentence from section on choosing colors</nowiki>
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| 969889389 || 2020-07-27T23:52:52Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Tidying careless errors in paragraph about effect of visual subtense</nowiki>
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| 969888092 || 2020-07-27T23:40:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>exponent 8 in 2^8</nowiki>
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| 969887795 || 2020-07-27T23:37:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Two shades of gray in Figure 2</nowiki>
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| 969887610 || 2020-07-27T23:35:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Text about Figure 2 now better-matches Figure 2.</nowiki>
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| 969886327 || 2020-07-27T23:21:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Putting reference citations in order</nowiki>
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| 969885948 || 2020-07-27T23:18:09Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Errant period</nowiki>
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| 969793013 || 2020-07-27T13:08:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted reference to "Mathematical formula" in heading for CIE calculation of self-luminous grayscale</nowiki>
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| 969792170 || 2020-07-27T13:03:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>re-use of the word "data" ties together several sentences of the past paragraph</nowiki>
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| 969791197 || 2020-07-27T12:56:54Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Still working on final paragrapn</nowiki>
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| 969790314 || 2020-07-27T12:49:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>A more pointed opening sentence for the final paragraph</nowiki>
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| 969789533 || 2020-07-27T12:43:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Tidying the final paragraph</nowiki>
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| 969788789 || 2020-07-27T12:37:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>fighting citation overkill in final paragraph</nowiki>
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| 969664718 || 2020-07-26T19:15:36Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted superfluous ":" at Kieras reference</nowiki>
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| 969664433 || 2020-07-26T19:13:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Further clarification of last paragraph</nowiki>
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| 969662982 || 2020-07-26T19:05:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improvements attempted in final paragraph</nowiki>
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| 969659624 || 2020-07-26T18:50:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Shrinking Figure 5, adding refs for three "unique" aspects of CIE grayscale formula</nowiki>
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| 969656595 || 2020-07-26T18:33:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added to captions of Figures 1 and 6, to solve the problems of "too small" from my point of view, or "too large" from your point of view.</nowiki>
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| 969541218 || 2020-07-26T01:58:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Two more guidelines, in final paragraphs about gray scale</nowiki>
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| 969540334 || 2020-07-26T01:51:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improved text layout for final section</nowiki>
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| 969540062 || 2020-07-26T01:49:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Figure 9 caption said too much, redundant with text</nowiki>
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| 969539488 || 2020-07-26T01:45:23Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Somehow Figure 9 disappeared during our editing, so this edit reinstates it</nowiki>
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| 969536641 || 2020-07-26T01:22:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>re-ordering sentences re effect of background luminance, to enhance flow and clarity</nowiki>
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| 969535724 || 2020-07-26T01:16:36Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>text flow around Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 969535556 || 2020-07-26T01:15:16Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Figure 5 was too big, so this is a shrink.</nowiki>
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| 969535271 || 2020-07-26T01:12:58Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Experimenting with Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 969535065 || 2020-07-26T01:11:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Better wording re color deficiency, and slight size adjustment to enhance legibility (after all, the point) of Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 969534255 || 2020-07-26T01:06:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>enhanced clarity of statement re effect of small symbols</nowiki>
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| 969533802 || 2020-07-26T01:02:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>reducing the number of citations per statement, as suggested by editors</nowiki>
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| 969494437 || 2020-07-25T19:39:09Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>paring multiple citations iaw comment offerred by an editor</nowiki>
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| 969493713 || 2020-07-25T19:34:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Corrected spelling mistake</nowiki>
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| 969493364 || 2020-07-25T19:31:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Formatting section on optimization of color codes.</nowiki>
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| 969492916 || 2020-07-25T19:28:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another attempt to get rid of unintended box in optimizing color codes</nowiki>
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| 969492661 || 2020-07-25T19:26:52Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Experimenting with getting rid of unintended box around text for optimized color dodes</nowiki>
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| 969492090 || 2020-07-25T19:22:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Word-smithing the paragraph on optimized color codes</nowiki>
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| 969491124 || 2020-07-25T19:16:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>paring multiple citations iaw comment offerred by an editor</nowiki>
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| 969488597 || 2020-07-25T18:57:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>paring multiple citations iaw comment offerred by an editor</nowiki>
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| 969487921 || 2020-07-25T18:53:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>paring multiple citations iaw comment offerred by an editor</nowiki>
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| 969487348 || 2020-07-25T18:49:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>paring multiple citations iaw comment offerred by an editor</nowiki>
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| 969485841 || 2020-07-25T18:37:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>paring multiple citations iaw comment offerred by an editor</nowiki>
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| 969484895 || 2020-07-25T18:29:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>paring multiple citations iaw comment offerred by an editor</nowiki>
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| 969477728 || 2020-07-25T17:34:02Z || Timtrent || <nowiki>expand comment</nowiki>
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| 969477237 || 2020-07-25T17:30:19Z || Timtrent || <nowiki>Commenting on submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1)</nowiki>
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| 969309725 || 2020-07-24T17:07:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>mentioning "highlight patterns" early in applications</nowiki>
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| 969309401 || 2020-07-24T17:05:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Slight changes at the beginning of Applictions, to reduce contentiousness and to improve flow.</nowiki>
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| 969308627 || 2020-07-24T17:00:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>eliminated redundant caption for Figure 4</nowiki>
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| 969308273 || 2020-07-24T16:58:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>re-link to the Wikipedia article on luminance; the  previous link was lost during the article abbreviation process</nowiki>
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| 969307283 || 2020-07-24T16:51:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added a word to promote continuity between paragraphs</nowiki>
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| 969306589 || 2020-07-24T16:46:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Changed introductory paragraph to better reflect condensed and abbreviated content</nowiki>
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| 969171438 || 2020-07-23T20:08:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Making text flow around Figure 9</nowiki>
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| 969170941 || 2020-07-23T20:04:54Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>In response to editor request to abbreviate, I cut Tables 2 and 3, and the associated text about a computational example and about calculating the optimum background luminance.</nowiki>
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| 969168789 || 2020-07-23T19:52:24Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Experimenting with the size of Figure 1, adjusted flow of text around Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 969167571 || 2020-07-23T19:45:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Experiment with size of Figure 1, link to Wikipedia "visual angle", and inclusion of legibility in "practical problems.</nowiki>
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| 969165361 || 2020-07-23T19:30:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Changed the introductory paragraph, to reflect subsequent abbreviation of the article</nowiki>
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| 969165183 || 2020-07-23T19:29:43Z || Scope creep || <nowiki>ce</nowiki>
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| 969165069 || 2020-07-23T19:28:54Z || Scope creep || <nowiki>Commenting on submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1)</nowiki>
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| 968843224 || 2020-07-21T21:09:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Substantial abbreviation, including items specifically noted by Wikipedia editors.  More to come after I look at this result.</nowiki>
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| 968644822 || 2020-07-20T16:57:45Z || Sam-2727 || <nowiki>Declining submission: essay - Submission reads like an essay ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1)</nowiki>
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| 968644290 || 2020-07-20T16:54:39Z || Sam-2727 || <nowiki>not a problem anymore</nowiki>
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| 968211952 || 2020-07-17T23:00:16Z || Auric || <nowiki>/* Deficiency of color vision can affect symbol salience */</nowiki>
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| 968211633 || 2020-07-17T22:57:38Z || Auric || <nowiki>/* Methods of choosing colors for salience */</nowiki>
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| 968210949 || 2020-07-17T22:51:53Z || Sam-2727 || <nowiki>Added {{[[Template:Copypaste|Copypaste]]}} tag ([[WP:TW|TW]])</nowiki>
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| 968210431 || 2020-07-17T22:47:13Z || Auric || <nowiki></nowiki>
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| 968210169 || 2020-07-17T22:44:47Z || Auric || <nowiki>/* Grayscale, an important tool for visualization of data */</nowiki>
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| 968209826 || 2020-07-17T22:41:38Z || Auric || <nowiki>/* Legibility in the context of color coding */</nowiki>
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| 968209738 || 2020-07-17T22:40:55Z || Auric || <nowiki>/* Methods of choosing colors for salience */</nowiki>
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| 968209381 || 2020-07-17T22:38:06Z || Auric || <nowiki>/* Examples of color coding for information salience */</nowiki>
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| 968208571 || 2020-07-17T22:32:32Z || Auric || <nowiki>Filled in 0 bare reference(s) with reFill 2</nowiki>
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| 968182263 || 2020-07-17T19:13:14Z || Timtrent || <nowiki>Fixing style/layout errors</nowiki>
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| 968182187 || 2020-07-17T19:12:30Z || Timtrent || <nowiki>Commenting on submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1)</nowiki>
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| 968181786 || 2020-07-17T19:09:25Z || NoSandboxesHere || <nowiki>([[WP:BOT|Beep, Boop]]). I Have Removed An Template Which Is Not Valid In Draftspace</nowiki>
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| 968181732 || 2020-07-17T19:09:03Z || Timtrent || <nowiki>Timtrent moved page [[User:RobertCCarter/sandbox]] to [[Draft:Color coding technology for visualization]]: Preferred location for [[WP:AFC|AfC]] submissions</nowiki>
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| 968181163 || 2020-07-17T19:05:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki></nowiki>
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| 967912041 || 2020-07-16T02:11:09Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link for theodolite</nowiki>
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| 967909913 || 2020-07-16T01:56:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>changed repeated word</nowiki>
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| 967909678 || 2020-07-16T01:55:04Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>shedding pirate ad on "shows"</nowiki>
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| 967870957 || 2020-07-15T20:39:08Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>citation re-use</nowiki>
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| 967870614 || 2020-07-15T20:36:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>citation re-use</nowiki>
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| 967870166 || 2020-07-15T20:32:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>examples of color coded flow charts</nowiki>
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| 967867564 || 2020-07-15T20:12:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>superscripts for cd/m^2</nowiki>
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| 967866579 || 2020-07-15T20:04:43Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>clarifying Grayscale</nowiki>
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| 967844045 || 2020-07-15T17:19:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More movement of sentences in Grayscale to improve flow</nowiki>
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| 967843381 || 2020-07-15T17:13:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>reduced redundancy in Grayscale section by moving sentences.</nowiki>
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| 967842403 || 2020-07-15T17:05:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>re-ordered paragraphs in Grayscale, to improve flow</nowiki>
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| 967841520 || 2020-07-15T16:58:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>flow of sentences in Grayscale section</nowiki>
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| 967818830 || 2020-07-15T14:11:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Explanation of where the numbers came from for minimum salient color differences</nowiki>
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| 967817282 || 2020-07-15T13:58:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added "outer" to make meaning clearer</nowiki>
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| 967816551 || 2020-07-15T13:53:21Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Linking first word of this article to Visual search article in Wikipedia</nowiki>
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| 967815768 || 2020-07-15T13:47:22Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added value to expected value</nowiki>
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| 967815425 || 2020-07-15T13:44:21Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added several links to other Wikipedia pages</nowiki>
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| 967746397 || 2020-07-15T01:50:52Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Text flow around Figure 5 and a comma to indicate subordinate clause in disussion of CIE gray-scale formula</nowiki>
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| 967745879 || 2020-07-15T01:45:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Text flow around Figure 5 and relocating sentences in discussion of CIE grayscale calculation</nowiki>
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| 967744632 || 2020-07-15T01:33:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Text flow around Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 967743984 || 2020-07-15T01:26:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added link to Wikipedia article on exponential distribution, and added paragraph structure to discussion of CIE gray scale formula</nowiki>
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| 967682612 || 2020-07-14T17:21:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Corrected error in citation of ref named "Fortyfive"</nowiki>
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| 967682074 || 2020-07-14T17:17:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Reference to Figure 1b</nowiki>
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| 967680959 || 2020-07-14T17:08:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>errant capital letter</nowiki>
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| 967680524 || 2020-07-14T17:04:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>calculated color differenc eis objective, color difference might be subjective</nowiki>
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| 967679877 || 2020-07-14T17:00:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>on topic: visualization</nowiki>
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| 967679346 || 2020-07-14T16:56:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>New topic, new paragraph</nowiki>
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| 967644544 || 2020-07-14T12:51:08Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added 26th Guideline to summary list</nowiki>
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| 967643030 || 2020-07-14T12:40:16Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>bolding the final Guideline</nowiki>
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| 967642224 || 2020-07-14T12:34:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added reference for military displays</nowiki>
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| 967560274 || 2020-07-14T00:05:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>25 Guidelines in intro; added one about compatibility of legibility and salience</nowiki>
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| 967559736 || 2020-07-14T00:01:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>24 Guidelines, putting the correct number in intro.  Plus removing experimental indents from summary of Guidelines</nowiki>
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| 967559273 || 2020-07-13T23:57:15Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Double indent let numbers run consecutive?</nowiki>
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| 967559140 || 2020-07-13T23:55:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Does indent let numbered list run consecutive?</nowiki>
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| 967558827 || 2020-07-13T23:52:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Guidelines list tidying</nowiki>
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| 967558685 || 2020-07-13T23:51:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Correcting intro, not 22 guidelines, but 23</nowiki>
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| 967558531 || 2020-07-13T23:50:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Attempting to show readers where they can find each summarized Guideline elaborated with context in this article</nowiki>
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| 967556262 || 2020-07-13T23:26:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Experiment with redirection</nowiki>
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| 967556072 || 2020-07-13T23:24:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Discussion of gray scale in context of Figure 2</nowiki>
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| 967555586 || 2020-07-13T23:20:09Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>One more guideline from final sentence of the article, and making text consistent with Figure 2.</nowiki>
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| 967554941 || 2020-07-13T23:13:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Figure 2, once more with feeling!</nowiki>
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| 967554313 || 2020-07-13T23:07:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added Figure 2</nowiki>
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| 967552528 || 2020-07-13T22:50:38Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted extra # in list of guidelines</nowiki>
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| 967490897 || 2020-07-13T15:10:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Summary listing of Guidelines, up front.</nowiki>
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| 967480516 || 2020-07-13T13:54:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>corrected lower 95% color difference for improvements of salience, in context of small visual fields.</nowiki>
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| 967479561 || 2020-07-13T13:46:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added sentences about Figure 3 in the context of small visual fields and intermediate background luminance</nowiki>
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| 967464001 || 2020-07-13T11:41:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Configuration of text around Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 967463636 || 2020-07-13T11:38:21Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Working on flow of text around figure 4</nowiki>
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| 967462905 || 2020-07-13T11:31:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Still working on Figure 4 fitting in.</nowiki>
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| 967455326 || 2020-07-13T10:22:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More spacing of Figure 4 caption</nowiki>
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| 967455181 || 2020-07-13T10:21:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Spacing of Figure 4 caption</nowiki>
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| 967454912 || 2020-07-13T10:18:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added comment about proliferation of colors</nowiki>
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| 967404068 || 2020-07-13T02:08:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added link for tristimulus values</nowiki>
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| 967403554 || 2020-07-13T02:04:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>One more shot at fitting Figure 4 in context</nowiki>
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| 967403404 || 2020-07-13T02:02:58Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fitting Figure 4 in context</nowiki>
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| 967402953 || 2020-07-13T01:59:38Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another try with Figure 3 as a thumb</nowiki>
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| 967401180 || 2020-07-13T01:46:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Cutting out Figure 3; it needs bigger fonts to be legible as a thumb</nowiki>
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| 967400747 || 2020-07-13T01:43:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Changing Figure 3 from thumb to basic</nowiki>
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| 967400147 || 2020-07-13T01:39:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Adding Figure 3</nowiki>
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| 967396244 || 2020-07-13T01:13:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Preparation for new Figure 3</nowiki>
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| 967382153 || 2020-07-12T23:13:35Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added figure 2b</nowiki>
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| 967381655 || 2020-07-12T23:08:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Arranging Figure 2a</nowiki>
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| 967381289 || 2020-07-12T23:04:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added Figure 2a</nowiki>
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| 967380581 || 2020-07-12T22:57:00Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>One last nudge to get Figure 4 situated</nowiki>
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| 967380455 || 2020-07-12T22:55:52Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fine Tuning placement of Figure 4</nowiki>
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| 967380359 || 2020-07-12T22:54:50Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Again with fitting context around figure 4</nowiki>
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| 967380250 || 2020-07-12T22:53:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Adjusting context around figure 4</nowiki>
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| 967380080 || 2020-07-12T22:51:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another try at fitting Figure 4 in context</nowiki>
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| 967379736 || 2020-07-12T22:48:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Resizing Figure 4</nowiki>
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| 967379593 || 2020-07-12T22:46:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added the correct Figure 4, I hope</nowiki>
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| 967378637 || 2020-07-12T22:36:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Removed figure 4</nowiki>
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| 967378381 || 2020-07-12T22:34:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added figure 4</nowiki>
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| 967375242 || 2020-07-12T22:05:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added Figure 6d</nowiki>
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| 967374655 || 2020-07-12T22:00:02Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added Figure 6c</nowiki>
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| 967374055 || 2020-07-12T21:54:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added Figure 6b</nowiki>
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| 967373441 || 2020-07-12T21:49:58Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>adjusting text spacing to fit Figures 6a-d</nowiki>
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| 967372772 || 2020-07-12T21:43:58Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added figure 6a</nowiki>
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| 967371643 || 2020-07-12T21:34:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Preparing for Figure 6, in four part</nowiki>
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| 967367701 || 2020-07-12T21:03:16Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>One more space before Figure 5 caption</nowiki>
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| 967367598 || 2020-07-12T21:02:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added 2 spaces before Figure 5 caption</nowiki>
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| 967367462 || 2020-07-12T21:01:16Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added space before Grayscale is an important tool, to better fit around Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 967366459 || 2020-07-12T20:53:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added figure 7 and associated reference</nowiki>
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| 967364529 || 2020-07-12T20:38:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added a space before last section, to fit previous figure</nowiki>
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| 967364221 || 2020-07-12T20:36:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Experimenting to find a better layout of Figure 9</nowiki>
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| 967363825 || 2020-07-12T20:33:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added Figure 8</nowiki>
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| 967362642 || 2020-07-12T20:23:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>errant period and uncited reference</nowiki>
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| 967362213 || 2020-07-12T20:20:38Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added references for Figure 8</nowiki>
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| 967361128 || 2020-07-12T20:12:15Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixed missing /> on citation</nowiki>
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| 967360387 || 2020-07-12T20:07:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>converted Figure 9 to thumb, and input related citations.</nowiki>
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| 967359511 || 2020-07-12T20:00:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added context of Figure 9</nowiki>
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| 967358683 || 2020-07-12T19:53:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added Figure 9</nowiki>
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| 967356242 || 2020-07-12T19:37:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Clarified Table 2</nowiki>
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| 967355672 || 2020-07-12T19:33:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Clarified title</nowiki>
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| 967355451 || 2020-07-12T19:31:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>converting "estimating" to "quantifying".</nowiki>
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| 967355113 || 2020-07-12T19:29:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Making link text consistent with context/</nowiki>
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| 967353165 || 2020-07-12T19:14:54Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another guess at spacing around figure 5</nowiki>
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| 967352969 || 2020-07-12T19:13:12Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Manual insertion of cpation for Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 967352583 || 2020-07-12T19:10:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fine tuning space around Figure 5.  Where's the caption?</nowiki>
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| 967352214 || 2020-07-12T19:07:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Spacing around Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 967351627 || 2020-07-12T19:02:36Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Altered last sentence of introduction to be less insulting to math phobes.</nowiki>
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| 967351275 || 2020-07-12T19:00:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Altered title and first sentence, moved Figure 5</nowiki>
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| 967239048 || 2020-07-12T01:44:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>An attempt to create Figure 5, which I uploaded using the wizard</nowiki>
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| 967226979 || 2020-07-11T23:38:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Populated Table 3</nowiki>
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| 967225345 || 2020-07-11T23:20:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Populated Table 2</nowiki>
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| 967223939 || 2020-07-11T23:06:56Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improvements to format of Table 2</nowiki>
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| 967223277 || 2020-07-11T23:00:06Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Table 2 outlined</nowiki>
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| 967191144 || 2020-07-11T18:21:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>gave date of FAA report</nowiki>
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| 967190841 || 2020-07-11T18:19:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added "color-coding technology" to the last sentence</nowiki>
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| 967190492 || 2020-07-11T18:16:09Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added "Corporation" to Boeing</nowiki>
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| 967190226 || 2020-07-11T18:13:54Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Completed citations, for color and information display</nowiki>
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| 967179307 || 2020-07-11T16:46:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Bolded the final two guidelines, and added the final section</nowiki>
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| 967178788 || 2020-07-11T16:42:15Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Completed citations in discussion of gray scale</nowiki>
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| 967177670 || 2020-07-11T16:32:22Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Adding hyphens and superscripts to final gray scale discussion</nowiki>
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| 967176840 || 2020-07-11T16:25:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Titivating final gray scale discussion to improve clarity and quality of citation.</nowiki>
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| 967172665 || 2020-07-11T15:50:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added break for new paragraph on Figure 7</nowiki>
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| 967172290 || 2020-07-11T15:47:34Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>missed one superscript in previous edit</nowiki>
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| 967171957 || 2020-07-11T15:44:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>superscripts for cd/m^2</nowiki>
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| 967169773 || 2020-07-11T15:26:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added word to clarify effect of background luminance on salience</nowiki>
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| 967169192 || 2020-07-11T15:21:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Topic sentence added, in Color coding applications</nowiki>
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| 967168810 || 2020-07-11T15:18:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Changed sentence order in Applications of color coding</nowiki>
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| 967168500 || 2020-07-11T15:15:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted unneded words in Applications of color coding</nowiki>
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| 967167814 || 2020-07-11T15:10:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Paragraph separation in Choosing colors</nowiki>
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| 967167008 || 2020-07-11T15:03:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>changed supplement to complement in the introduction because supplement had been hijacked by a link to an ad</nowiki>
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| 967085513 || 2020-07-11T01:54:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added text to Math formula section</nowiki>
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| 967084849 || 2020-07-11T01:47:26Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Math formula references</nowiki>
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| 967081428 || 2020-07-11T01:13:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>A mathematical formula relating gray shades to luminance</nowiki>
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| 967077157 || 2020-07-11T00:39:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>A mathematical formula relating gray shades to image luminances</nowiki>
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| 967076754 || 2020-07-11T00:35:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>moved refs outside period</nowiki>
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| 967076506 || 2020-07-11T00:33:37Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>completed Effect of the background luminance on grayscale salience</nowiki>
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| 967075490 || 2020-07-11T00:24:17Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>corrected reference formats in initial grayscale sections</nowiki>
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| 967075130 || 2020-07-11T00:21:00Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>First two sections of grayscale, with references</nowiki>
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| 967010407 || 2020-07-10T15:51:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Corrected error in citation named Fortyfive</nowiki>
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| 967009902 || 2020-07-10T15:47:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Correctly re-cited based on refname=</nowiki>
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| 967008539 || 2020-07-10T15:36:33Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Reordered the paragraphs in discussion of color blindness</nowiki>
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| 967008171 || 2020-07-10T15:33:28Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added paragraph structure to discussion of effects of color blindness on color coding</nowiki>
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| 967006437 || 2020-07-10T15:20:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Color coding applications, clarified another applicatoin involving data symmetries</nowiki>
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| 967005134 || 2020-07-10T15:11:43Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>changed "limiting" to "bounding" to describe edges of display gamut</nowiki>
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| 967004483 || 2020-07-10T15:07:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Moved sentence to reduce reduncancy of different sections</nowiki>
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| 967003569 || 2020-07-10T15:00:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added "neural" to modify network in opening paragraph</nowiki>
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| 967002369 || 2020-07-10T14:50:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Unnecessary sentence in summary is deleted</nowiki>
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| 967002139 || 2020-07-10T14:48:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improvement of first sentence</nowiki>
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| 966923228 || 2020-07-10T01:28:52Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Bolding the guideline about  increasing the smallest color differences in a color code</nowiki>
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| 966922690 || 2020-07-10T01:23:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixed a reference format</nowiki>
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| 966726975 || 2020-07-08T20:32:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Missing text in Methods for choosing colors for salience</nowiki>
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| 966725892 || 2020-07-08T20:25:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>edit to visualize missing text in Methods of Chooding colors for salience</nowiki>
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| 966719564 || 2020-07-08T19:38:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Adjusted bolding in Methods of choosing colors for salience</nowiki>
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| 966716729 || 2020-07-08T19:18:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixed reference named "Six"</nowiki>
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| 966714163 || 2020-07-08T18:59:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More editing of Color coding applications</nowiki>
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| 966713606 || 2020-07-08T18:55:10Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Rearranged sentence order in Color Coding applications</nowiki>
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| 966712782 || 2020-07-08T18:48:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Tidying in source several gaffs observed while reading the product</nowiki>
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| 966711427 || 2020-07-08T18:38:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>section added, with references and links, Legibility in the context of color coding</nowiki>
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| 966606505 || 2020-07-08T02:18:36Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added a bold in Deficiency of color vision can affect symbol salience</nowiki>
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| 966606199 || 2020-07-08T02:15:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted superfluous text</nowiki>
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| 966606019 || 2020-07-08T02:13:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deficiency of color vision can affect symbol salience</nowiki>
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| 966601862 || 2020-07-08T01:37:15Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added superscript in arctangent in Calclulating a symbol's visual angle</nowiki>
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| 966601514 || 2020-07-08T01:33:52Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added a space between sentences in Calculating a symbol's visual angle</nowiki>
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| 966601211 || 2020-07-08T01:31:02Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added section Calculating a symbol's visual angle, with link to Wikipedia article on the subject</nowiki>
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| 966600760 || 2020-07-08T01:26:48Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added another Williams reference at the end of Symbol size affects color salience</nowiki>
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| 966600205 || 2020-07-08T01:21:44Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixed erroneous reference 17 citation mark-up language</nowiki>
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| 966597944 || 2020-07-08T01:02:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Bold added for guidelines in Symbol size affects color salience</nowiki>
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| 966596364 || 2020-07-08T00:52:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Symbol size affects color salience section added with citations and links</nowiki>
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| 966592177 || 2020-07-08T00:22:29Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link to Wikipedia article for triangular matrix</nowiki>
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| 966590716 || 2020-07-08T00:10:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>link to Wikipedia article on grayscale, and uniform spelling of grayscale throughout</nowiki>
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| 966518555 || 2020-07-07T14:52:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More examples of color coding applications</nowiki>
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| 966516983 || 2020-07-07T14:41:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>More examples in color coding applications</nowiki>
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| 966429151 || 2020-07-07T02:06:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Citations for Color Coding is Fast...</nowiki>
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| 966424127 || 2020-07-07T01:25:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>In Color Code Applications, fixing bullet list and citation</nowiki>
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| 966423406 || 2020-07-07T01:20:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>citations in Color Code Applications</nowiki>
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| 966413344 || 2020-07-07T00:10:53Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>word-smithing by inverting sentence order</nowiki>
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| 966412685 || 2020-07-07T00:05:52Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>word smithing by inverting word order</nowiki>
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| 966258649 || 2020-07-06T01:52:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added section of color coding applications</nowiki>
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| 966257154 || 2020-07-06T01:37:20Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Continuing the experiment with numbered lists</nowiki>
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| 966256761 || 2020-07-06T01:33:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Bolded a guideline re optimized selection of code colors, deleted unneeded text, experimented with numbered list</nowiki>
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| 966255175 || 2020-07-06T01:18:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixing empty citation and similar issues</nowiki>
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| 966254145 || 2020-07-06T01:08:40Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Someone is pirating an inserted add for diet products linked to the word "scale" in gray scale, so I deleted the word scale</nowiki>
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| 966253643 || 2020-07-06T01:04:00Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>wording change</nowiki>
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| 966253182 || 2020-07-06T00:59:38Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixed reference names throughout, substituting alphbetic names for numeric</nowiki>
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| 966251273 || 2020-07-06T00:38:51Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added reference for color coding data symmetries</nowiki>
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| 966249771 || 2020-07-06T00:22:54Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted text, in citatoin 4, identified as problematic by sandbox error detection</nowiki>
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| 966249532 || 2020-07-06T00:20:23Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added reference to both Williams's 1966 article and his 1967 contract report</nowiki>
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| 966248362 || 2020-07-06T00:08:21Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>added postscript to reference 3</nowiki>
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| 966247901 || 2020-07-06T00:04:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Try writing "Three" for the name of reference 3</nowiki>
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| 966219193 || 2020-07-05T20:03:18Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Can I cite reference 2 again? <ref name="" /></nowiki>
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| 966218770 || 2020-07-05T20:00:07Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Trying to get reference 2 to appear</nowiki>
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| 966218119 || 2020-07-05T19:55:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Still fiddling with ref 2 to make it appear in article</nowiki>
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| 966217600 || 2020-07-05T19:51:36Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Again giving ref 2 a name for later repeated citation</nowiki>
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| 966216970 || 2020-07-05T19:46:46Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Giving reference 2 a name for repeated citation</nowiki>
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| 966216744 || 2020-07-05T19:44:57Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Moving second citation outside period</nowiki>
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| 966216440 || 2020-07-05T19:42:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Moved first citation outside period</nowiki>
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| 966216063 || 2020-07-05T19:39:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Trying to get third citation in markup to appear in article</nowiki>
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| 966215621 || 2020-07-05T19:36:24Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Still trying to get LG Williams cited</nowiki>
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| 966215389 || 2020-07-05T19:34:43Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Yet another attempt to get LG Williams cited</nowiki>
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| 966215133 || 2020-07-05T19:32:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another attempt to get LG Williams cited</nowiki>
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| 966214655 || 2020-07-05T19:29:31Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted markup language causing empty citations</nowiki>
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| 966213123 || 2020-07-05T19:17:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another experiment with <refname "JEPHPP" /></nowiki>
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| 966211639 || 2020-07-05T19:07:13Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added / in refs for repeated citations</nowiki>
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| 966206165 || 2020-07-05T18:27:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Tried an alternative format for a citation that appears in source code but not in sandbox article.</nowiki>
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| 966201627 || 2020-07-05T17:54:09Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Still studing why reference 3 doesn't show in reference list.</nowiki>
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| 966200689 || 2020-07-05T17:47:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Another attempt at reference 3</nowiki>
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| 966197459 || 2020-07-05T17:23:16Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>correcting reference citation formats</nowiki>
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| 966195743 || 2020-07-05T17:11:35Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Removed duplicate premature reference citation</nowiki>
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| 966086411 || 2020-07-05T01:49:47Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Completed inputting text and references for Methods of Choosing Colors for Salience</nowiki>
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| 966031825 || 2020-07-04T20:58:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>uploaded two figures, 2a and 2b</nowiki>
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| 966018003 || 2020-07-04T19:36:27Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted reference 7 re exponential distro possibly not applying to radiologist search of med images.  It was personal communication, with no url so unacceptable according to error message.</nowiki>
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| 966016240 || 2020-07-04T19:26:42Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixed access date on reference 7</nowiki>
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| 966007418 || 2020-07-04T18:41:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Attempt to get rid of a dieting add that linked itself to use of the word "scale" in gray scale.  No link apparent in source code, but link appears in sandbox view of page.</nowiki>
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| 966006648 || 2020-07-04T18:35:32Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Uniform use of the word "expected" in the context of Table 1</nowiki>
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| 966006003 || 2020-07-04T18:31:08Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Improved formatting of Table 1</nowiki>
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| 966002916 || 2020-07-04T18:09:14Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Removed excess space before sixth citation</nowiki>
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| 966002514 || 2020-07-04T18:06:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Deleted excess space before second citation</nowiki>
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| 965726443 || 2020-07-03T01:58:55Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added content for Table 1, plus text and citations beginning Methods for choosing colors for salience (with links to related Wikipedia articles)</nowiki>
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| 965710994 || 2020-07-02T23:41:39Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Search time and the distribution of search time */ Format Table 1</nowiki>
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| 965708327 || 2020-07-02T23:17:50Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>/* Mechanisms of search of visualized data */ removed excess []</nowiki>
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| 965655762 || 2020-07-02T16:39:45Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added a section, search time and the distribution of search time, plus associated citations</nowiki>
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| 965652698 || 2020-07-02T16:16:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Altered image format to basic on Figures 6-9</nowiki>
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| 965651581 || 2020-07-02T16:07:38Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Third-level heading A mathematical formula relating gray scale...had a pirate link to scale.  So I changed scale to shade.</nowiki>
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| 965650449 || 2020-07-02T16:00:04Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixed mismatch of second-level heading delimeters on Information-display context of color coding</nowiki>
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| 965650046 || 2020-07-02T15:57:02Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Fixed chapter reference in second citation</nowiki>
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| 965649469 || 2020-07-02T15:53:05Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Trying to fix Chapter in first two citations</nowiki>
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| 965648261 || 2020-07-02T15:43:11Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki><ref>...</ref>  I was missing the / in the close.</nowiki>
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| 965646072 || 2020-07-02T15:26:30Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted == heading delimiter from article title</nowiki>
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| 965645865 || 2020-07-02T15:24:41Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Removed all-caps, to make major headings conform to WP manual of stype</nowiki>
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| 965644362 || 2020-07-02T15:13:19Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>used <ref> format to enclose citation data input by wizard.</nowiki>
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| 965643652 || 2020-07-02T15:07:59Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>corrected link format to show intended text</nowiki>
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| 965639033 || 2020-07-02T14:32:03Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>more experimentation with link formatting in first sentence.</nowiki>
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| 965638840 || 2020-07-02T14:30:49Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>experimenting with link format in first sentence of first summary paragraph</nowiki>
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| 965638474 || 2020-07-02T14:28:24Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>deleted erroneous first level = heading indicator on summary paragraph.</nowiki>
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| 965638061 || 2020-07-02T14:25:25Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>Added a link in summary, for visualization.  Added ending sentence of summary re why this topic important.  Corrected level of headings.  Added text for ===Mechanisms of visual search===.  Experimented with citation template.</nowiki>
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| 964872279 || 2020-06-28T02:35:15Z || RobertCCarter || <nowiki>I have an article about color coding technology for data search and grouping.  I'm experimenting with Wikipedia markup language, which is new to me.  My objective is to try sandboxing my abstract, first section and additional section headings.  I have tried to use the markup language to indicate where my Figures would be placed.  The remaining text has been written and figures created.</nowiki>
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