Edithistory:Chinese Characteristics
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| 830478299 | 2018-03-15T02:08:34Z | 70.79.158.61 | |
| 830477986 | 2018-03-15T02:06:10Z | 70.79.158.61 | edited some more |
| 830464654 | 2018-03-15T00:15:56Z | 206.12.42.137 | |
| 830464422 | 2018-03-15T00:14:18Z | 206.12.42.137 | |
| 830460296 | 2018-03-14T23:39:26Z | 206.87.158.182 | italics and corrections |
| 830457276 | 2018-03-14T23:12:29Z | 206.12.42.137 | everything bud |
| 830442171 | 2018-03-14T21:10:40Z | 70.79.158.61 | |
| 830442060 | 2018-03-14T21:09:49Z | 70.79.158.61 | |
| 830438715 | 2018-03-14T20:43:18Z | 70.79.158.61 | |
| 830291303 | 2018-03-13T22:46:34Z | 206.12.42.139 | I haven't finished editing this page yet, as I need to update the citations (but wikipedia won't let me save the page without publishing). However, I did link the key terms to other Wikipedia pages. |
| 830008786 | 2018-03-12T04:30:52Z | MatthewVanitas | Declining submission: This is definitely making progress!
You have a couple formatting issue:
*I really don't think you need a list of the chapters, that can be removed.
*You need to [[WP:Wikilink]] key names and technical terms (only on their first appearance in the article). I think you tried to do that on WASP but you need to use double "[" not single. See what I did to [[Orientalist]] to make it blue.
*You have some older footnotes written as <code><nowiki><sup>[6]</sup>, you need to remove those and/or replace them with an actual "ref" coded footnote. Same where you have non-functioning footnotes written as "[3]" and the like. If you're not sure, check WP:Referencing for beginners.
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| 830008307 | 2018-03-12T04:25:03Z | MatthewVanitas | /* Summary */ format |
| 829991425 | 2018-03-12T01:44:11Z | 206.12.46.229 | |
| 829991339 | 2018-03-12T01:43:25Z | 206.12.46.229 | |
| 829989954 | 2018-03-12T01:32:48Z | 206.12.46.229 | |
| 829985729 | 2018-03-12T00:56:49Z | 206.12.46.229 | Added in a summary |
| 829985174 | 2018-03-12T00:51:38Z | 206.12.46.229 | |
| 829985082 | 2018-03-12T00:50:49Z | 206.12.46.229 | Added in Chapters |
| 828190811 | 2018-03-01T02:14:20Z | Bkissin | Commenting on submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9) |
| 828190600 | 2018-03-01T02:12:18Z | MatthewVanitas | comment |
| 828190327 | 2018-03-01T02:10:09Z | Dan arndt | Declining submission: npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9) |
| 828190169 | 2018-03-01T02:08:53Z | MatthewVanitas | Declining submission: Is the article about the ''book'', or about the writer? You have several random sections about chapters in the book, and ''then'' you start talking about the writer. If it's about him, please remove the extra material before you start talking about him. Also, do not footnote to other Wikipedia article, just wikilink them like so: [[Yellow peril]]. Also, did you check GoogleBooks for facts about him you can cite to the book? I found [https://books.google.com/books?id=ZE7K5qGUyKQC&pg=PA115&dq=%22Arthur+Henderson+Smith%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjH6PmUhcrZAhVDeawKHVQdBRk4FBDoAQhSMAg#v=onepage&q=%22Arthur%20Henderson%20Smith%22&f=false this for example] that could be useful. Note you can instantly turn any GoogleBooks URL into a full Wikipedia footnote using http://reftag.appspot.com ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9) |
| 828188665 | 2018-03-01T01:56:44Z | Asia351student | |
| 828188501 | 2018-03-01T01:55:28Z | Asia351student | all |
