Edithistory:Jacob Beresin
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| 1299922911 | 2025-07-11T06:00:24Z | DannyS712 bot | Task 3: Disable the categories on this page while it is still a draft, per [[WP:DRAFTNOCAT]]/[[WP:USERNOCAT]] |
| 1299890357 | 2025-07-11T01:20:22Z | Pretzelfactory | Time magazine ref added to expand Beresin influence with his expansion into the candy retail and automated vending markets, while staying short, sourced, and encyclopedic. |
| 1299886363 | 2025-07-11T00:45:14Z | Pretzelfactory | added see also for clearer organization and stronger relevance to Jacob Beresin’s legacy: |
| 1299884605 | 2025-07-11T00:31:47Z | Pretzelfactory | This edit added Beresin achievements recognized with Humanitarian organizations & missions with local and national impact. |
| 1299876300 | 2025-07-10T23:22:59Z | Pretzelfactory | Increased detail on connections to other vending and food industry crossover connections added |
| 1299868375 | 2025-07-10T22:14:48Z | Pretzelfactory | Editing to add more strength to cite ref and language with connections to Philadelphia for review consideration |
| 1299859523 | 2025-07-10T21:17:38Z | Pretzelfactory | Added/revised:This citation confirms Beresin’s final resting place in Mount Sinai Cemetery, matching his Philadelphia Inquirer obituary and supporting the biographical timeline in your lead and “Death” section. |
| 1299815423 | 2025-07-10T15:23:46Z | Pretzelfactory | Rewrite to clean up some language in second review of total resubmission for review |
| 1299561494 | 2025-07-09T04:29:19Z | Pretzelfactory | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1299560928 | 2025-07-09T04:24:29Z | Pretzelfactory | Rewritten/Recompose: Addressed reviewer concerns by adding reliably sourced citations with significant coverage, resolving citation errors and formatting issues, and removing promotional tone and vague statements to improve neutrality and notability |
| 1299560251 | 2025-07-09T04:18:48Z | Pretzelfactory | Rewritten Revised citations and formatting to resolve reference errors; added inline sources with significant coverage; attemepted to address previous notability concerns and fixed LLM artifacts per reviewer feedback. |
| 1299558399 | 2025-07-09T04:02:08Z | Pretzelfactory | |
| 1299558198 | 2025-07-09T04:00:13Z | Pretzelfactory | Revamped and mostly rewritten attempting to meet requirements avoiding large language model styles |
| 1299476753 | 2025-07-08T16:50:49Z | Theroadislong | Declining submission: bio - Submission is about a person not yet shown to meet notability guidelines and ai - Submission appears to be a large language model output |
| 1299475342 | 2025-07-08T16:40:26Z | Pretzelfactory | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1299474645 | 2025-07-08T16:34:21Z | Pretzelfactory | -- Draft New article creation: biography of Jacob Beresin, pioneer of movie theater concessions and national vending distribution. Includes sourced history, industry impact, and corporate legacy tracing to ARAMARK. |
