Edithistory:Jonathan Frantz
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| 1280997352 | 2025-03-17T17:46:04Z | Citation bot | Add: doi, pages, volume, pmid, date, authors 1-3. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by Eastmain | #UCB_webform 91/187 |
| 1280808465 | 2025-03-16T15:51:50Z | Klbrain | Nominated page for deletion using [[Wikipedia:Page Curation|Page Curation]] ([[Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Jonathan Frantz]]) |
| 1280736579 | 2025-03-16T05:32:34Z | Iridescent | I'm not seeing the G11 element here; this certainly isn't unambiguous spam |
| 1280642919 | 2025-03-15T18:05:16Z | Praxidicae | Requesting speedy deletion ([[WP:CSD#G11|CSD G11]]). |
| 1280641960 | 2025-03-15T18:01:21Z | Editora89119 | Removed PROD tag. Added independent sources, peer-reviewed medical journal citations, FDA trial involvement, and media coverage from WINK News and Ophthalmology. Meets WP:NACADEMIC and WP:GNG. Request article retention. |
| 1280280640 | 2025-03-13T17:21:18Z | Klbrain | Nominated page for deletion using [[Wikipedia:Page Curation|Page Curation]] (prod) |
| 1280280243 | 2025-03-13T17:18:23Z | Klbrain | authority control |
| 1277963193 | 2025-02-27T18:50:19Z | Citation bot | Add: s2cid, pmid, authors 1-1. Removed URL that duplicated identifier. Removed parameters. Some additions/deletions were parameter name changes. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by Headbomb | #UCB_toolbar |
| 1277963129 | 2025-02-27T18:49:50Z | Headbomb | ce |
| 1277680856 | 2025-02-26T02:23:41Z | Gheus | |
| 1276830659 | 2025-02-21T00:35:30Z | Devonian Wombat | Cleaning up accepted [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]] submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]]) |
| 1276830653 | 2025-02-21T00:35:28Z | Devonian Wombat | Devonian Wombat moved page [[Draft:Jonathan Frantz]] to [[Jonathan Frantz]]: Publishing accepted [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]] submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]]) |
| 1276830505 | 2025-02-21T00:34:30Z | Devonian Wombat | Removed numbered listing, de facto bullet points |
| 1276260901 | 2025-02-17T20:58:47Z | Keith D | Fix cite date error |
| 1276109236 | 2025-02-16T22:52:22Z | Editora89119 | As requested, I removed the bullet points and made it a paragraph. |
| 1275130345 | 2025-02-11T06:36:04Z | Devonian Wombat | Commenting on submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]]) |
| 1274825804 | 2025-02-09T13:24:07Z | Editora89119 | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1274475204 | 2025-02-07T15:05:30Z | Editora89119 | Removed / replaced some terms like “pivotal,” “groundwork,” “instrumental,” “foundational studies,” “paved the way,” and more to avoid subjective language. |
| 1272504063 | 2025-01-28T23:41:43Z | Citation bot | Added pmid. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by Dominic3203 | Linked from User:AlexNewArtBot/CleanupSearchResult | #UCB_webform_linked 1733/1894 |
| 1271957693 | 2025-01-26T14:09:44Z | Citation bot | Added pmid. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by Dominic3203 | Linked from User:AlexNewArtBot/CleanupSearchResult | #UCB_webform_linked 1529/1873 |
| 1270856825 | 2025-01-21T15:28:13Z | Editora89119 | I went over each and every word to try to apply a more encyclopedic and neutral tone. From words like "pioneer" to "notable" to "key researcher," (and more) I have removed any and all language that could even remotely appear promotional. Thanks! |
| 1270758937 | 2025-01-21T03:00:20Z | Utopes | Declining submission: npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]]) |
| 1270720590 | 2025-01-20T22:39:15Z | Citation bot | Altered template type. Add: pmid, doi, pages, issue, volume, journal. Removed parameters. Some additions/deletions were parameter name changes. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by Лисан аль-Гаиб | [[Category:AfC pending submissions by age/0 days ago]] | #UCB_Category 4/122 |
| 1270715042 | 2025-01-20T22:05:27Z | Editora89119 | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1270709581 | 2025-01-20T21:33:13Z | Editora89119 | Thank you for reviewing the article. I’ve worked to ensure it's well-sourced and neutral. I revised, removing adjectives or phrases that may come across as promotional. Other than that, the article is well sourced with medical journals, as well as local and national news coverage. Could you point out specific areas where the tone seems promotional so I can address them? Or if this is satisfactory, would you remove the rejection? Thank you in advance. |
| 1270683350 | 2025-01-20T19:02:30Z | Qcne | Declining submission: adv - Submission reads like an advertisement ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]]) |
| 1270681525 | 2025-01-20T18:50:00Z | Editora89119 | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1270449960 | 2025-01-19T16:00:36Z | GoingBatty | [[MOS:SURNAME]] |
| 1270449858 | 2025-01-19T16:00:06Z | GoingBatty | struck through comment that has been resolved |
| 1270449757 | 2025-01-19T15:59:35Z | GoingBatty | /* Early research and preclinical studies */ trimmed |
| 1270449571 | 2025-01-19T15:58:36Z | GoingBatty | /* Legacy and media coverage */ fixed references |
| 1270448701 | 2025-01-19T15:54:13Z | GoingBatty | /* Contributions to laser vision correction */ expanded reference |
| 1270447817 | 2025-01-19T15:50:04Z | GoingBatty | fixed references |
| 1270445628 | 2025-01-19T15:39:00Z | GoingBatty | removed maintenance templates no longer needed, fixed capitalization in headings, punctuation before references, removed "Dr." per [[MOS:SURNAME]] |
| 1270444055 | 2025-01-19T15:30:24Z | Citation bot | Alter: pages, url, template type, date, title. URLs might have been anonymized. Add: pages, issue, volume, journal, date, title, doi, authors 1-9. Changed bare reference to CS1/2. Removed parameters. Formatted [[WP:ENDASH|dashes]]. Some additions/deletions were parameter name changes. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by GoingBatty | #UCB_toolbar |
| 1270431787 | 2025-01-19T14:18:42Z | Editora89119 | Added more citations from both medical journals and news coverage. |
| 1270417905 | 2025-01-19T12:46:54Z | Editora89119 | Did my homework and have really enjoyed this deep dive process! I added a new section showing the extensive preliminary work with primates, leading up to making the surgery available for humans. All citations are in, and I also hyperlinked medical terms (for example, photorefractive keratectomy) and others to their respective wikipedia links. Thank you for the help and suggestions! |
| 1269829576 | 2025-01-16T16:28:57Z | GoingBatty | Declining submission: ilc - Submission is a BLP that does not meet minimum inline citation requirements ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]]) |
| 1269829347 | 2025-01-16T16:27:21Z | GoingBatty | added maintenance templates and wikilinks |
| 1269827833 | 2025-01-16T16:18:21Z | GoingBatty | /* Awards and Recognitions */ copyediting |
| 1269827628 | 2025-01-16T16:17:18Z | GoingBatty | /* Contributions to Laser Vision Correction */ fixed reference |
| 1269827479 | 2025-01-16T16:16:29Z | Citation bot | Alter: template type, date. Add: title, date, pmc, pmid, doi, pages, issue, volume, journal, authors 1-10. Removed URL that duplicated identifier. Removed access-date with no URL. Changed bare reference to CS1/2. Removed parameters. Some additions/deletions were parameter name changes. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by GoingBatty | #UCB_toolbar |
| 1269827412 | 2025-01-16T16:16:07Z | GoingBatty | /* top */ fixed references |
| 1269827074 | 2025-01-16T16:14:05Z | GoingBatty | fixed layout |
| 1269825378 | 2025-01-16T16:04:00Z | Editora89119 | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1269825100 | 2025-01-16T16:02:13Z | Editora89119 | I am not connected to this doctor, with the exception his office operated on my eyes. There, I learned Dr Frantz was one of the first in the country to perform laser eye corrections. My husband is a doctor and directed me to the journals, as needed for citations. I heavily cite the journals to avoid any appearance of promotion, which this is not,. Any advice is appreciated as I really enjoy returning to posting here. Not enough time! |
