Edithistory:Museum of Care
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| 1110637743 | 2022-09-16T15:50:19Z | Chris troutman | Declining submission: corp - Submission is about a company or organization not yet shown to meet notability guidelines ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1110630572 | 2022-09-16T15:06:19Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1110630128 | 2022-09-16T15:03:43Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1110443936 | 2022-09-15T14:10:03Z | RichBot | ([[WP:BOT|Beep, Boop]]). I have removed a template which is not valid in Draftspace |
| 1110443606 | 2022-09-15T14:07:33Z | DoubleGrazing | DoubleGrazing moved page [[User:Kuzinakka/sandbox]] to [[Draft:Museum of Care]]: Preferred location for [[WP:AFC|AfC]] submissions |
| 1110441916 | 2022-09-15T13:55:53Z | Kuzinakka | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1110064983 | 2022-09-13T11:05:37Z | Rita blum2022 | |
| 1109048995 | 2022-09-07T16:40:17Z | JesseRafe | /* Concept */ "concept... concept... conceive" in short order, removed unneeded phrase |
| 1108983104 | 2022-09-07T08:40:43Z | Kuzinakka | replaced the "museum of care" with MoC in the body of the article |
| 1108980511 | 2022-09-07T08:17:03Z | Kuzinakka | added the archive date of the publication, ref 2. Hopefully, I found it right |
| 1108979948 | 2022-09-07T08:11:52Z | Kuzinakka | added the archivation date of the publication. Hopefully, I found it right |
| 1108978443 | 2022-09-07T07:59:16Z | Kuzinakka | copy-editing |
| 1108976916 | 2022-09-07T07:46:10Z | Kuzinakka | reformulated the mission |
| 1108803674 | 2022-09-06T10:13:56Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1108803624 | 2022-09-06T10:13:23Z | Kuzinakka | specified the mission, 2nd and 3rd sentences. |
| 1104945624 | 2022-08-17T17:51:59Z | W1tchkr4ft 00 | few formating things and mostly details in citations... Sometimes it's the little things that help. :) |
| 1104768532 | 2022-08-16T20:14:03Z | Kuzinakka | edited references |
| 1104755538 | 2022-08-16T18:40:57Z | JesseRafe | c/e, don't pipe to fix a spelling inconsistency, change the spelling. A bit more on names |
| 1104742607 | 2022-08-16T17:11:41Z | Kuzinakka | spelling removed a hashtag |
| 1104740208 | 2022-08-16T16:55:01Z | Kuzinakka | alphabetized names |
| 1104737274 | 2022-08-16T16:34:05Z | Kuzinakka | spelling, name dropping |
| 1104716376 | 2022-08-16T14:07:58Z | JesseRafe | /* Achievement and development */ doesn't seem different than history. Spelling and word choice, same comment about notability for name-dropping, please alphabetize these by last name not first name, and remove the WLs from repeated mentions (and convert to surname only); removed the listcruft of ELs (I mentioned this in the first response on my talk page) as it looks like it's a page to drive traffic to ELs. There's a place for them, sure, but be judicious in new article submissions |
| 1104715758 | 2022-08-16T14:03:41Z | JesseRafe | /* History */ The first paragraph needs a rewrite. I can't get through a sentence of it, don't use as many direct quotes or jargon, just clearly state things -- without hashtags. re 2nd para, name dropping is usually poor form and is often looked at in new article submissions as a form of attempting notability by association. In any event, it should be a full sentence and should only include notable names as WP is not an indiscriminate list of information and we're saying it's a partial list. |
| 1104714382 | 2022-08-16T13:54:54Z | JesseRafe | /* Concept */ c/e, second time there's piping to redlinks, just leave it, extra piping where neither are articles is extra unnecessary; other formatting fixes, word choices |
| 1104713910 | 2022-08-16T13:51:30Z | JesseRafe | /* top */ copyedit for cohesion and standard formatting. This is just the lede of an article and there ought to be very good reasons to use quotes from websites, more so for blockquotes; try to get away from self-sourcing as much as possible and reproducing whole passages from About or Our Mission type subpages of target website does not help notability, establish the project clearly and then move on |
| 1104419300 | 2022-08-14T21:17:39Z | MartinPoulter | more tweaks |
| 1104419160 | 2022-08-14T21:16:23Z | MartinPoulter | some tidying up |
| 1104365023 | 2022-08-14T13:34:41Z | Kuzinakka | added references |
| 1103974818 | 2022-08-11T21:45:00Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1103974483 | 2022-08-11T21:41:56Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1103974230 | 2022-08-11T21:39:47Z | Kuzinakka | edited the section concept |
| 1103972132 | 2022-08-11T21:21:01Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1103971419 | 2022-08-11T21:15:08Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1103966981 | 2022-08-11T20:36:29Z | Kuzinakka | edited ref style |
| 1103951427 | 2022-08-11T18:22:30Z | Kuzinakka | edited a ref. |
| 1103949001 | 2022-08-11T18:04:25Z | Kuzinakka | edited a ref |
| 1103947149 | 2022-08-11T17:50:46Z | Kuzinakka | edited a ref |
| 1103946528 | 2022-08-11T17:44:12Z | Kuzinakka | addad a ref |
| 1103946078 | 2022-08-11T17:40:10Z | Kuzinakka | added a ref |
| 1101771332 | 2022-08-01T18:48:19Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1101770590 | 2022-08-01T18:43:11Z | Kuzinakka | edited ref |
| 1101769138 | 2022-08-01T18:33:04Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1101768495 | 2022-08-01T18:28:39Z | Kuzinakka | edited ref |
| 1101766394 | 2022-08-01T18:15:20Z | Kuzinakka | listed participants in alphabetical order |
| 1101709804 | 2022-08-01T12:05:29Z | Fishgodown | /* History */ |
| 1101669155 | 2022-08-01T06:41:04Z | Fishgodown | /* Achievement and development */ |
| 1101667746 | 2022-08-01T06:30:32Z | Fishgodown | /* History */ |
| 1101667641 | 2022-08-01T06:29:47Z | Fishgodown | /* History */ |
| 1101594032 | 2022-07-31T21:19:52Z | Fishgodown | /* History */ |
| 1101592236 | 2022-07-31T21:07:22Z | Fishgodown | /* Achievement and development */Added names of participants |
| 1101527990 | 2022-07-31T14:06:26Z | Kuzinakka | edit references |
| 1101511415 | 2022-07-31T12:08:29Z | 46.183.103.17 | ref edited |
| 1101498047 | 2022-07-31T10:16:45Z | 46.183.103.17 | added a ref |
| 1101493030 | 2022-07-31T09:34:45Z | 46.183.103.17 | minor: style |
| 1101485149 | 2022-07-31T08:29:27Z | 46.183.103.17 | |
| 1100535514 | 2022-07-26T12:12:55Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100535347 | 2022-07-26T12:11:32Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100534960 | 2022-07-26T12:08:18Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100534742 | 2022-07-26T12:06:30Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100534141 | 2022-07-26T12:01:19Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100533322 | 2022-07-26T11:55:13Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100532967 | 2022-07-26T11:52:46Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100529534 | 2022-07-26T11:24:20Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100529437 | 2022-07-26T11:23:36Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100527797 | 2022-07-26T11:09:24Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100527183 | 2022-07-26T11:04:32Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100526918 | 2022-07-26T11:02:08Z | Kuzinakka | edited citations |
| 1100526596 | 2022-07-26T10:59:33Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1100525488 | 2022-07-26T10:49:35Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1096461175 | 2022-07-04T16:32:49Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1096459536 | 2022-07-04T16:20:08Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1096458813 | 2022-07-04T16:15:19Z | Kuzinakka | |
| 1096456654 | 2022-07-04T16:03:33Z | Kuzinakka | general structure, first draft |
| 1096444930 | 2022-07-04T14:30:05Z | Mamaanarhia | |
| 1096444779 | 2022-07-04T14:28:45Z | Kuzinakka | privetstvie |
