Edithistory:Peter van Oossanen
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| oldid | date/time | username | edit summary |
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| 1073575383 | 2022-02-23T11:35:46Z | DoubleGrazing | Declining submission: v - Submission is improperly sourced ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1064086542 | 2022-01-06T14:08:26Z | 2021DutchSailor | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1062139899 | 2021-12-26T15:24:53Z | 2021DutchSailor | /* The 1983 America's Cup */ Adding link to magazine reference |
| 1062130268 | 2021-12-26T13:52:05Z | 2021DutchSailor | /* Peter van Oossanen */ latest edit |
| 1060182268 | 2021-12-13T23:14:47Z | Missvain | Declining submission: ilc - Submission is a BLP that does not meet minimum inline citation requirements ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1056583664 | 2021-11-22T16:29:51Z | Theroadislong | Commenting on submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1051919740 | 2021-10-26T09:59:42Z | 2021DutchSailor | |
| 1051919679 | 2021-10-26T09:59:01Z | 2021DutchSailor | This is the final edit. Removed have been references to Van Oossanen's work by him that led to criticism the entry read like advertising. The references left are outside views.. |
| 1051607893 | 2021-10-24T15:24:17Z | 2021DutchSailor | Am culling references and bibliography |
| 1051236478 | 2021-10-22T09:33:03Z | 2021DutchSailor | I'm culling some references |
| 1051226116 | 2021-10-22T07:56:20Z | 2021DutchSailor | I edited down the proposed Van Oossanen entry, notably by deleting the section on to specific products that Van Oossanen Naval Architects markets today. This, in response to the complaint that the entry reads like an advertisement for the man. Next edit will affect the references. |
| 1051222714 | 2021-10-22T07:16:28Z | 2021DutchSailor | I tightened up the Peter van Oossanen background, Early Life and Education, Early Career sections |
| 1033107830 | 2021-07-11T17:09:20Z | Primefac | fix template |
| 1033105755 | 2021-07-11T16:55:28Z | Qwerfjkl | Declining submission: adv - Submission reads like an advertisement ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1033087080 | 2021-07-11T14:23:48Z | 2021DutchSailor | |
| 1033086767 | 2021-07-11T14:20:58Z | 2021DutchSailor | final tightening of text throughout |
| 1033078961 | 2021-07-11T13:16:38Z | 2021DutchSailor | Provided relevant references throughout the text |
| 1032924743 | 2021-07-10T13:52:58Z | 2021DutchSailor | switched to source editing |
| 1032924170 | 2021-07-10T13:47:30Z | 2021DutchSailor | Restored the bulleted listing |
| 1032923134 | 2021-07-10T13:38:21Z | 2021DutchSailor | I tightened copy overall, deleted matter not very relevant to the subject |
| 1032915043 | 2021-07-10T12:28:07Z | 2021DutchSailor | /* Personal life */ section removed entirely as Peter van Oossanen is still alive |
| 1030848249 | 2021-06-28T10:33:57Z | Theroadislong | Commenting on submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1030672210 | 2021-06-27T11:21:13Z | Gråbergs Gråa Sång | |
| 1030671925 | 2021-06-27T11:18:46Z | Gråbergs Gråa Sång | |
| 1030666569 | 2021-06-27T10:31:26Z | Gråbergs Gråa Sång | /* The 1983 America’s Cup */ |
| 1030662613 | 2021-06-27T09:57:00Z | Gråbergs Gråa Sång | /* Further reading */ EL |
| 1030661889 | 2021-06-27T09:50:02Z | Gråbergs Gråa Sång | /* References */ details |
| 1030659920 | 2021-06-27T09:30:52Z | Gråbergs Gråa Sång | /* top */ |
| 1030659760 | 2021-06-27T09:29:32Z | Gråbergs Gråa Sång | /* top */ Wikilink and customary italics |
| 1030656032 | 2021-06-27T08:48:25Z | Theroadislong | tidy per [[WP:MOS]] |
| 1030655873 | 2021-06-27T08:46:58Z | Theroadislong | tidy up a bit per MOS |
| 1030655516 | 2021-06-27T08:43:39Z | Theroadislong | Theroadislong moved page [[User:2021DutchSailor/sandbox]] to [[Draft:Peter van Oossanen]]: preferred location for drafts |
| 1030651442 | 2021-06-27T07:57:04Z | 2021DutchSailor | I submit an article on Dutch naval architect Piet van Oossanen. In 1983, his 'winged keel' let Australia II win the America's Cup. WP articles report on that, yet are vague or question the keel's designer. Aussie pride got in the way! (See: 'winged keel' + '1983 America's Cup'). My article has a section to end that controversy and links to news/book publications. I know Van Oossanen's work as I'm a yachting media journalist. BTW: I'm stumped by WP reference coding. I count on you! |
