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1024979124 2021-05-25T01:55:29Z Wolfch Nominated for deletion; see [[:Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Total Immersion]].
961432827 2020-06-08T12:42:29Z 199.203.203.245 /* Further reading */
961432754 2020-06-08T12:41:51Z 199.203.203.245 /* Further reading */
906617750 2019-07-17T01:33:44Z Cthomas3 Removing link to deleted portal, removing now-empty See also section
861802041 2018-09-30T03:40:34Z RfinS
861801937 2018-09-30T03:39:40Z RfinS
837543737 2018-04-21T14:11:01Z Revirvlkodlaku /* Balance */
809487898 2017-11-09T12:49:23Z Melcous Reverted 1 edit by [[Special:Contributions/Lepota|Lepota]] ([[User talk:Lepota|talk]]). ([[WP:TW|TW]])
805596072 2017-10-16T12:14:25Z Vladan Kzmvić
801206008 2017-09-18T09:24:35Z Heyzeuss /* Balance */Ref format
784726286 2017-06-09T19:25:30Z Wmenwmen Update: link didn't work
729490839 2016-07-12T15:14:54Z 176.20.223.126
719377518 2016-05-09T09:46:43Z 87.13.1.57 (see previous note, didn't work)
719377474 2016-05-09T09:46:10Z 87.13.1.57 Still unclear why there's not a page for disambiguation, but at least now it's easier to notice the article won't be about a corporation.
682844580 2015-09-26T13:08:51Z Xypron Indicate the commercial background.
620511567 2014-08-09T14:44:00Z Location /* Technique */ Removed section. Only citation is a blog post (unreliable); rest uncited for over a year.
618346297 2014-07-25T00:13:08Z Monkbot /* Further reading */Task 5: Fix [[Help:CS1_errors#deprecated_params|CS1 deprecated coauthor parameter errors]]
605416587 2014-04-23T06:55:26Z BattyBot fixed [[Help:CS1 errors#bad_date|CS1 errors: dates]] to meet [[MOS:DATEFORMAT]] (also [[WP:AWB/GF|General fixes]]) using [[Project:AWB|AWB]] (10081)
602211655 2014-04-01T03:14:02Z Monkbot /* Further reading */Task 1c: Fix [[Help:CS1_errors#deprecated_params|CS1 deprecated date parameter errors]]
583429407 2013-11-26T19:59:09Z AndyTheGrump Undid revision 583429212 by [[Special:Contributions/149.55.30.100|149.55.30.100]] ([[User talk:149.55.30.100|talk]]) revert off-topic irrelevance
583429212 2013-11-26T19:57:31Z 149.55.30.100
582849564 2013-11-22T18:34:38Z 176.43.206.80 /* Balance */
582849377 2013-11-22T18:33:08Z 176.43.206.80 /* Balance */
582000954 2013-11-17T03:17:50Z AndyTheGrump Undid revision 582000795 by [[Special:Contributions/69.250.77.49|69.250.77.49]] ([[User talk:69.250.77.49|talk]]) off-topic linkspam
582000795 2013-11-17T03:15:56Z 69.250.77.49
555112550 2013-05-14T21:00:17Z AnomieBOT Dating maintenance tags: {{Citation needed}}
555109754 2013-05-14T20:39:36Z Location Material needs to beremoved uncited material; added citation needed templates to additional uncited material;
550898514 2013-04-18T00:35:04Z AnomieBOT Dating maintenance tags: {{Citation needed}}
550896362 2013-04-18T00:14:37Z Location /* Advantages */ {{citation needed}}
543870383 2013-03-13T16:21:32Z Addbot [[User:Addbot|Bot:]] Migrating 2 interwiki links, now provided by [[Wikipedia:Wikidata|Wikidata]] on [[d:q1423872]]
534696720 2013-01-24T19:14:44Z Magioladitis clean up using [[Project:AWB|AWB]] (8863)
529078189 2012-12-21T05:57:39Z AnomieBOT Dating maintenance tags: {{Better source}}
529076414 2012-12-21T05:36:52Z Location /* Front crawl */ {{Better source|reason=blog posts generally do not fulfill Wikipedia standards for reliable sources}}
527754206 2012-12-12T20:37:33Z Demiurge1000 update hatnote as discussed on talk page
527751150 2012-12-12T20:16:40Z AnomieBOT Dating maintenance tags: {{Notability}} {{Peacock}}
527748179 2012-12-12T19:55:52Z Location /* Notable Total Immersion swimmers */ Removed section. There are no secondary sources provided that indicate that these are notable TI swimmers. Only one link mentions TI and it is primary source material (i.e. promotional).
527747545 2012-12-12T19:51:32Z Location /* Target audience */ Not in citation given, plus it is merely promotional material.
527747241 2012-12-12T19:49:34Z Location /* Target audience */ Discussed at RSN. Removed speculation not supported by references. The number of interviews could easily be interpreted as an indicator of the author's promotional ability rather than the method's popularity.
527744686 2012-12-12T19:31:51Z AndyTheGrump tag for {{notability}}, {{peacock}} - see talk page
527744061 2012-12-12T19:27:12Z AndyTheGrump remove hogwash re gravity
527741254 2012-12-12T19:08:34Z Location /* Further reading */ Article found here: http://www.americanrunning.org/downloads/26?dl=1&save_form=clicked . It does not mention TI.
527651780 2012-12-12T04:17:54Z Location /* Notable Total Immersion swimmers */ removed dead link/incomplete citation
527651598 2012-12-12T04:16:13Z Location /* External links */ removed links; one requires registration, the other does not point to TI
527651467 2012-12-12T04:14:58Z Location removed dead link; no indication of what statement of fact is being cited
527592504 2012-12-11T20:42:02Z AnomieBOT Dating maintenance tags: {{Fact}}
527589382 2012-12-11T20:21:42Z Dger /* Propulsion */ These statements are unsupportable physically.
527588617 2012-12-11T20:15:54Z Location {{fact}} per recent talk page comment
526086170 2012-12-02T23:13:42Z Olag
522188933 2012-11-09T15:36:33Z ClueBot NG Reverting possible vandalism by [[Special:Contributions/41.177.45.136|41.177.45.136]] to version by SchuminWeb. False positive? [[User:ClueBot NG/FalsePositives|Report it]]. Thanks, [[User:ClueBot NG|ClueBot NG]]. (1325562) (Bot)
522188921 2012-11-09T15:36:29Z 41.177.45.136 /* Notable Total Immersion swimmers */
519620985 2012-10-24T19:11:27Z SchuminWeb Change hat
519620869 2012-10-24T19:10:47Z SchuminWeb /* References */ This doesn't go here
515226313 2012-09-29T23:29:18Z 134.240.76.163 /* Notable Total Immersion swimmers */
511927201 2012-09-11T23:06:53Z /* Balance */ dito
511927106 2012-09-11T23:06:05Z /* Balance */ dito; en-dash
511926886 2012-09-11T23:03:53Z /* Balance */ "&" -> "and"
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510051309 2012-08-31T03:35:15Z 122.61.177.109 /* Propulsion */
509527918 2012-08-28T01:28:02Z Makeswell removing my last edit because i see there is a tag in the references section from may of this year already.
509527689 2012-08-28T01:26:21Z Makeswell added citation needed tag to the top. a lot of this article has good citations but a lot of it doesn't have any whatsoever.
509527330 2012-08-28T01:23:44Z Makeswell read like an advertisement. more can be added to the lede but this had to be removed. it was also too vague and didn't specify who was being referred to, as well as referencing YouTube, again vaguely.
506487772 2012-08-09T01:59:14Z 69.118.238.21 /* Balance */
491943876 2012-05-11T04:56:35Z 108.162.180.40 /* Notable Total Immersion swimmers */
490345828 2012-05-02T19:31:40Z Location per MOS
490345323 2012-05-02T19:28:20Z Location /* References */ {{More footnotes|date=May 2012}}
490049739 2012-05-01T01:25:52Z ChrisGualtieri TypoScan Project / General Fixes, typos fixed: Youtube → YouTube using [[Project:AWB|AWB]]
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470382582 2012-01-09T05:09:59Z EoGuy /* Principles */ Sp
469383605 2012-01-03T19:58:41Z 95.144.90.178
469367695 2012-01-03T18:32:56Z AdventureBear -added additional TI Coach/ Swimmer records with references
469256410 2012-01-03T04:02:51Z 96.235.28.189 /* Notable Total Immersion Swimmers */
469256311 2012-01-03T04:02:08Z 96.235.28.189 added notable TI swimmers as a budding section, and one that can be added to.
469253861 2012-01-03T03:42:39Z 96.235.28.189 Removed "advert" and "expert" notices
469252770 2012-01-03T03:33:43Z 96.235.28.189 /* Advantages */ - removed statement taht TI never goes beyond intructory technique because a section was added above regarding joe novak, 9 time gold medalist in the patriot league, coached by Terry Laughlin using TOtal Immersion techniques.
469252618 2012-01-03T03:32:38Z 96.235.28.189 /* Advantages */ - removed "citation needed" from text "triathlets" as I have provided references to 4 different non -TI associated triathlon coaches above.
469252374 2012-01-03T03:30:44Z 96.235.28.189 - correcting references
469250853 2012-01-03T03:17:01Z 96.235.28.189 edited introduction to be slightly more comprehensive
469250491 2012-01-03T03:13:58Z 96.235.28.189 /* Target Audience */ - corrected reference anchors
469250378 2012-01-03T03:13:00Z 96.235.28.189 /* Target Audience */ - added references for both triathlon as well as sprint swimming applications
469246410 2012-01-03T02:37:55Z 96.235.28.189 /* Learning Approach */ - reference to motor learning
469244022 2012-01-03T02:18:37Z 96.235.28.189 /* Streamlining */
469243913 2012-01-03T02:17:44Z 96.235.28.189 Reorganization and embellishment of basic principals of TI.
466780527 2011-12-20T00:06:15Z Northamerica1000 /* Advantages */ +==See also== :{{portal|Swimming}}
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465547061 2011-12-13T00:10:11Z 76.85.139.250 /* Principles */
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428694344 2011-05-12T03:42:38Z Drdollars /* Further reading */ Removed inactive URLs
428694166 2011-05-12T03:40:54Z Drdollars /* Front Crawl */ Removed inactive reference link
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397516204 2010-11-18T17:01:37Z Zazpot rvv earlier deletion by 132.246.232.2 . Also added {{Advert}}.
389845751 2010-10-10T08:00:50Z 124.121.102.224 Removing the link, it redirects back to this page.
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373168262 2010-07-12T23:54:35Z Zazpot Surely training that is DESIGNED to overcome natural instincts is anything but natural. Added {{clarifyme}}.
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370261927 2010-06-26T15:21:47Z 89.139.19.245 /* Principles */
369411741 2010-06-21T19:13:05Z Gjs238 - parent cat
351247140 2010-03-21T22:45:24Z Swampyank link
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340684332 2010-01-29T08:27:03Z Heroeswithmetaphors /* References */
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271422495 2009-02-17T21:17:06Z Talldean /* External links */ Link to free source material.
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271421280 2009-02-17T21:11:56Z Talldean Adding reference link to primary author/source on five essentials of the freestyle stroke.
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271404564 2009-02-17T19:53:51Z Talldean /* Technique */ Broke techniques into sections by stroke type.
271404143 2009-02-17T19:51:47Z Talldean /* Principles */ Rewrite of four areas of focus, moved other stuff around.
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271400478 2009-02-17T19:33:42Z Talldean /* Technique */ Edited layout of crawl stroke, added details to breaststroke based on memory of Breaststroke for Every Body DVD.
271398665 2009-02-17T19:25:26Z Talldean /* Principles */ Changed layout of numbered list.
271398323 2009-02-17T19:23:58Z Talldean Trying to make this less an advertisement and more a factual overview of the teaching/coaching style. Halfway done, headed for lunch.
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246339864 2008-10-19T19:13:39Z Shuumai /* Notations */
236737312 2008-09-06T22:14:14Z UltraMagnus
236286938 2008-09-04T18:32:10Z Swimmiws Making the article more NPOV, removing the implication that it's the "surest" way to improve endurance and skill.
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232229546 2008-08-16T02:01:42Z 67.184.13.36 /* Advantages */
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230958743 2008-08-10T05:16:31Z 68.148.164.166 /* Advantages */
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227530916 2008-07-24T00:54:17Z Սահակ /* Advantages */
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224720289 2008-07-10T03:07:07Z VS Swim added link to Terry Laughlin
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175784999 2007-12-04T21:16:59Z Kcahilla /* Principles */
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174867702 2007-11-30T17:35:56Z Kcahilla /* Details */
166034104 2007-10-21T11:39:12Z Sehsuan /* Principles */
164475862 2007-10-14T11:09:59Z DocWatson42 /* Principles */ Changed dashes to colons.
156798877 2007-09-09T22:38:01Z Imroy some clean up - the article sounds like it's promoting something, and the 'debate' section uses weasel words when talking about 'critics' - some more references please
150966286 2007-08-13T14:57:57Z Frecklefoot wikified opening
150687692 2007-08-12T01:50:54Z Cacophony /* External links */ removed hewbrew website. ok on Hewbrew Wikipedia, not appropriate on English Wikipedia.
150687580 2007-08-12T01:50:05Z Cacophony moved references above external links
146994906 2007-07-25T14:08:23Z TonyClarke /* Advantages */
146993664 2007-07-25T14:01:27Z TonyClarke Addressing the intro's POV issues identified in the talk page.
146980671 2007-07-25T12:40:51Z 82.166.185.47
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146980466 2007-07-25T12:39:19Z 82.166.185.47
146878461 2007-07-25T00:03:40Z TonyClarke /* Debate */ TI doesn't really increase fitness in my opinion, so i replaced fitness with 'casual'
146878175 2007-07-25T00:01:52Z TonyClarke /* Advantages */ Rephrasing, broke up multi-clause sentences.
146877189 2007-07-24T23:56:14Z TonyClarke /* Debate */ Moved a strength to a new section on advantages, and moved Terry Laughlin's reply there too
146875725 2007-07-24T23:48:55Z TonyClarke /* Details */ Omitted negative reinserted and some rephrasing
124708746 2007-04-21T22:01:46Z Arnero /* Details */ Maybe the fans should make the text less provocative. Just revert, will be my last attempt on this article
109336395 2007-02-19T17:25:31Z 74.65.195.139 deleting poorly formatted and language inapproriate link for english wp
102190185 2007-01-21T10:36:57Z Xypron /* External links */
102189924 2007-01-21T10:33:59Z Xypron
99015628 2007-01-07T03:14:33Z 72.128.50.73 /* External links */
96487752 2006-12-26T02:27:13Z Mathmo /* Principles */ corrected red link
96487636 2006-12-26T02:26:21Z Mathmo /* Principles */ linking up
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73474408 2006-09-02T22:47:00Z Chris 73 Reverted edits by [[Special:Contributions/83.147.129.235|83.147.129.235]] ([[User talk:83.147.129.235|talk]]) to last version by SmackBot
73442565 2006-09-02T19:21:31Z 83.147.129.235 /* External links */
72794618 2006-08-30T10:39:08Z SmackBot ISBN formatting &/or general fixes using [[WP:AWB|AWB]]
66712015 2006-07-30T17:54:20Z Pakman044 added {{Swimming styles}}
60578319 2006-06-26T01:06:05Z Podbert /* External links */ remove external links; 1 dead, 2 personal sites
49651561 2006-04-22T21:18:59Z Tom harrison /* References */ update ref; template
44032968 2006-03-16T10:23:42Z CarolGray /* Principles */ editing for [[NPOV]]
44032538 2006-03-16T10:18:43Z CarolGray reinstate deleted paragraph with details of technique
44032140 2006-03-16T10:14:02Z CarolGray /* Principles */ editing for [[NPOV]]
44031447 2006-03-16T10:05:24Z CarolGray reinstate deleted paragraph for [[NPOV]]
44018663 2006-03-16T07:38:13Z 82.35.149.143 /* Debate */
37582617 2006-01-31T22:26:24Z 205.188.117.68 /* Debate */
37582283 2006-01-31T22:23:43Z 205.188.117.68 /* Principles */
37431569 2006-01-30T23:47:24Z 216.4.167.249 Add external link
35352041 2006-01-16T03:27:52Z 66.92.147.241 /* References */ split section, new link
29584010 2005-11-29T12:11:42Z CarolGray minor rephrase
28192533 2005-11-13T08:37:43Z CarolGray /* Debate */ minor improvements in phrasing
28192347 2005-11-13T08:34:29Z CarolGray /* Debate */ minor improvements
28143834 2005-11-12T21:10:26Z Michael Shields [[Total immersion]] moved to [[Total Immersion]]
28106560 2005-11-12T10:58:26Z CarolGray /* Debate */ reorder
28106420 2005-11-12T10:54:55Z CarolGray /* Debate */ additions - triathlon
28106253 2005-11-12T10:49:59Z CarolGray /* Debate */ wiki link
28106022 2005-11-12T10:44:10Z CarolGray /* Principles */ dab
28105986 2005-11-12T10:43:03Z CarolGray additions
28105444 2005-11-12T10:30:10Z CarolGray revert - decided earlier version is better
28105403 2005-11-12T10:29:08Z CarolGray /* Principles */ rearrangement
28105070 2005-11-12T10:20:30Z CarolGray /* Debate */ rephrasing
27952934 2005-11-10T20:22:37Z CarolGray /* Principles */ balance
27952554 2005-11-10T20:18:44Z CarolGray /* Debate */ grammar
27952448 2005-11-10T20:17:25Z CarolGray /* Principles */ rephrase
27950744 2005-11-10T19:57:24Z CarolGray /* Principles */ punct
27950660 2005-11-10T19:56:20Z CarolGray /* Principles */ grammar
27950604 2005-11-10T19:55:34Z CarolGray add
27950165 2005-11-10T19:50:53Z CarolGray Terry Laughlin
27948371 2005-11-10T19:30:40Z CarolGray /* Debate */ rephrase
27947725 2005-11-10T19:22:33Z CarolGray /* Debate */ add
27947577 2005-11-10T19:20:42Z CarolGray /* Debate */ rephrase to avoid repetition
27947368 2005-11-10T19:18:07Z CarolGray /* Criticisms */ major alterations
27945811 2005-11-10T18:57:59Z CarolGray cleanup introduction
27945626 2005-11-10T18:55:21Z CarolGray /* References */ deletion - not NPOV
27945404 2005-11-10T18:53:10Z CarolGray /* Criticisms */ deletion - not NPOV
27945327 2005-11-10T18:52:17Z CarolGray /* Criticisms */ typo
27945174 2005-11-10T18:50:21Z CarolGray /* Principles */ cleanup
27944981 2005-11-10T18:47:43Z CarolGray /* Principles */ rewritten to improve clarity
26648074 2005-10-27T20:57:20Z TonyClarke /* Principles */ as before
26648014 2005-10-27T20:56:34Z TonyClarke /* Principles */ Clearing up arm confusion.
26539523 2005-10-26T16:33:43Z 70.250.188.213 /* References */
21712928 2005-08-24T08:38:02Z Arnero /* Principles */
19689329 2005-07-27T03:36:15Z 65.31.152.118 /* Principles */
19689302 2005-07-27T03:35:37Z 65.31.152.118 /* Principles */
16867613 2005-06-16T04:52:49Z 69.158.104.197
15271716 2005-02-10T14:47:11Z Pcpcpc
10131264 2004-10-24T22:34:38Z TonyClarke /* References */ + categories, sport and swimming.
6836303 2004-10-24T22:33:02Z TonyClarke Added link
6836261 2004-10-24T22:23:08Z TonyClarke Sectioning
6836002 2004-10-24T22:21:52Z TonyClarke added book reference
6835977 2004-10-24T22:09:19Z TonyClarke Fixed link
6835669 2004-10-24T22:07:48Z TonyClarke
6835628 2004-10-24T22:05:25Z TonyClarke same again!
6835571 2004-10-24T22:04:32Z TonyClarke fixing links
6835552 2004-10-24T22:03:46Z TonyClarke Fixing link
6835527 2004-10-24T21:58:18Z TonyClarke New page on a fairly radical new approach to swimming.