Edithistory:William Rothman
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| 1044079899 | 2021-09-13T13:11:00Z | Jms19961996 | |
| 1044079849 | 2021-09-13T13:10:42Z | Jms19961996 | I amended the tone of the article to be more encyclopaedic, and also added some more independent sources to the article. |
| 1043273012 | 2021-09-09T07:31:44Z | TheChunky | Declining submission: npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1038933182 | 2021-08-15T17:07:27Z | Citation bot | Alter: title, pages. Add: doi. Formatted [[WP:ENDASH|dashes]]. | [[WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by Eastmain | [[Category:Pending AfC submissions]] | #UCB_Category 93/496 |
| 1038439416 | 2021-08-12T15:17:51Z | Jms19961996 | |
| 1038437677 | 2021-08-12T15:04:52Z | Jms19961996 | added additional independent sources to support information |
| 1038336284 | 2021-08-11T23:14:38Z | Citation bot | Alter: pages. Add: authors 1-1. Removed parameters. Formatted [[WP:ENDASH|dashes]]. Some additions/deletions were parameter name changes. | [[WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by RoanokeVirginia | [[Category:AfC pending submissions by age/0 days ago]] | #UCB_Category 168/182 |
| 1038331763 | 2021-08-11T22:26:17Z | Jms19961996 | |
| 1038331516 | 2021-08-11T22:23:53Z | Jms19961996 | I worked a lot on readability as requested and reformatted the lead section in particular, adding some supplementary information to improve notability (also requested by the reviewer). I limited the amount of passages using italics. |
| 1035977943 | 2021-07-28T19:25:37Z | Timtrent | typos |
| 1035977878 | 2021-07-28T19:25:12Z | Timtrent | Declining submission: I am very interested in readability. Your first two paragraphs are opaque, in part rendered so by their length, in part by the italicisation (lose the liust if italicised things, p... ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1035950945 | 2021-07-28T16:12:58Z | Qwerfjkl | Expanding bare references using [[User:BrandonXLF/ReferenceExpander|ReferenceExpander]] |
| 1035950843 | 2021-07-28T16:12:18Z | Qwerfjkl | |
| 1034770920 | 2021-07-21T18:19:55Z | TheBirdsShedTears | Commenting on submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1030445313 | 2021-06-25T23:38:07Z | Jms19961996 | |
| 1030445263 | 2021-06-25T23:37:46Z | Jms19961996 | Changed the tone to be more formal and encyclopaedic, and omitted information and passages that did not meet these requirements. |
| 1029641479 | 2021-06-21T05:57:13Z | DGG | Declining submission: npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1028680306 | 2021-06-15T11:50:14Z | Jms19961996 | |
| 1028680207 | 2021-06-15T11:49:27Z | Jms19961996 | Added URLs and links to sources |
| 1028609391 | 2021-06-15T00:19:32Z | Jms19961996 | Provided references and citations |
| 1028382649 | 2021-06-13T17:08:56Z | Ken Tony | Declining submission: v - Submission is improperly sourced ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1027428090 | 2021-06-07T21:25:58Z | Keith D | /* top */Fix cite date error |
| 1027360370 | 2021-06-07T13:32:01Z | Jms19961996 | |
| 1027359942 | 2021-06-07T13:28:40Z | Jms19961996 | I created the page entirely |
