Edithistory:Bread Ahead Bakery
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| 1078309299 | 2022-03-20T22:41:30Z | CommonsDelinker | Removing [[:c:File:Bread_Ahead_Doughnuts.jpg|Bread_Ahead_Doughnuts.jpg]]; it has been deleted from Commons by [[:c:User:Strakhov|Strakhov]] because: per [[:c:Commons:Deletion requests/File:Bread Ahead Doughnuts.jpg|]]. |
| 1076897432 | 2022-03-13T14:21:17Z | CommonsDelinker | Removing [[:c:File:Matthew_Jones_-_Bread_Ahead.jpg|Matthew_Jones_-_Bread_Ahead.jpg]]; it has been deleted from Commons by [[:c:User:Regasterios|Regasterios]] because: [[:c:COM:VRT|No permission]] since 8 February 2022. |
| 1072387135 | 2022-02-17T12:46:02Z | 331dot | Rejecting submission: n - Topic is not notable ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1071421376 | 2022-02-12T14:39:59Z | Baz.ochen | small changes - grammatical errors etc |
| 1070862511 | 2022-02-09T17:25:42Z | Gab4gab | /* Most Profitable Bakery Items */ sentence case heading per manual of style |
| 1070846063 | 2022-02-09T15:40:08Z | Baz.ochen | Minor edits |
| 1070629789 | 2022-02-08T13:01:28Z | Baz.ochen | added in some links |
| 1070625492 | 2022-02-08T12:30:42Z | Dan arndt | Added {{[[Template:COI|COI]]}} tag |
| 1070470269 | 2022-02-07T16:43:57Z | Baz.ochen | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1070470209 | 2022-02-07T16:43:34Z | Baz.ochen | Thank you to Bonadea for your feedback. Appreciate the effort to make clear what should be changed. I have tried to follow your advice and make changes using the most reliable sources I could find and keeping very close to what journalists said without copying word for word. Rather rephrasing what they said. |
| 1070235745 | 2022-02-06T12:20:16Z | Bilorv | Declining submission: corp - Submission is about a company or organization not yet shown to meet notability guidelines ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1070217311 | 2022-02-06T09:41:03Z | Baz.ochen | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1070217280 | 2022-02-06T09:40:51Z | Baz.ochen | Not sure what else to change now...I've copied word for word copy from articles and not rephrased anything |
| 1070063021 | 2022-02-05T13:29:52Z | Bonadea | Commenting on submission ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1070062058 | 2022-02-05T13:21:18Z | Bonadea | Declining submission: adv - Submission reads like an advertisement and corp - Submission is about a company or organization not yet shown to meet notability guidelines ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1070055287 | 2022-02-05T12:24:52Z | Bonadea | consolidate 2 copies of the same ref, remove two superfluous refs to the company website |
| 1067486287 | 2022-01-23T18:42:56Z | Gab4gab | remove categories while a draft |
| 1067484085 | 2022-01-23T18:29:34Z | Baz.ochen | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1067484024 | 2022-01-23T18:29:08Z | Baz.ochen | added a bit of info |
| 1067078341 | 2022-01-21T16:22:59Z | Baz.ochen | just another minor edit |
| 1067077993 | 2022-01-21T16:20:46Z | Baz.ochen | Tried to make some major changes based on Slywriter's feedback. Hopefully this is better. |
| 1067073409 | 2022-01-21T15:50:46Z | Slywriter | Declining submission: adv - Submission reads like an advertisement ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1067073205 | 2022-01-21T15:49:21Z | Baz.ochen | I made a few changes to the grammar |
| 1065308709 | 2022-01-12T22:02:37Z | Baz.ochen | I made a few small changes to the page |
| 1063589541 | 2022-01-03T21:25:42Z | Baz.ochen | Thank you for all the comments and suggestions for edits. I have made a few more small tweaks trying to follow what has been suggested. Are there sections you believe I should remove or is the layout ok? |
| 1062557162 | 2021-12-29T05:03:05Z | Dan arndt | |
| 1062556567 | 2021-12-29T04:57:48Z | Dan arndt | Dan arndt moved page [[Draft:Bread Ahead Bakery & School]] to [[Draft:Bread Ahead Bakery]] |
| 1062505752 | 2021-12-28T21:45:58Z | Baz.ochen | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1062505616 | 2021-12-28T21:45:11Z | Baz.ochen | Based on the latest feedback I have tried to make more changes, hopefully this is better? |
| 1062459104 | 2021-12-28T16:02:09Z | Slywriter | Declining submission: adv - Submission reads like an advertisement ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1062430043 | 2021-12-28T11:37:41Z | KylieTastic | Filled in 3 bare reference(s) with reFill 2 |
| 1062429389 | 2021-12-28T11:30:59Z | KylieTastic | - |
| 1062428642 | 2021-12-28T11:23:08Z | Baz.ochen | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1062428500 | 2021-12-28T11:21:39Z | Baz.ochen | I have tried my best to make changes as suggested by Wikipedia. I hope this draft is better than the previous one. Kind regads, |
| 1062348825 | 2021-12-27T23:10:44Z | S0091 | Declining submission: npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1062346313 | 2021-12-27T22:49:43Z | Baz.ochen | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1061837446 | 2021-12-24T08:44:42Z | Baz.ochen | I have tried to make changes suggested by Wikipedia. Apologies for any mistakes, I have tried my very best to follow your advice. |
| 1061822491 | 2021-12-24T05:47:27Z | BattyBot | /* History */Fixed [[:Category:CS1 errors: extra text: edition|CS1 errors: extra text: edition]] and [[WP:AWB/GF|general fixes]] |
| 1061806780 | 2021-12-24T02:54:48Z | Rusalkii | Declining submission: adv - Submission reads like an advertisement ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]] 0.9.1) |
| 1061806018 | 2021-12-24T02:46:56Z | Rusalkii | clean up ([[User:Novem Linguae/Scripts/DraftCleaner.js|DraftCleaner]]) |
| 1061804222 | 2021-12-24T02:28:45Z | Baz.ochen | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1061804065 | 2021-12-24T02:27:11Z | Baz.ochen | I edited this page - adding information found on the internet and putting it into my own words. Citing the correct pages. And trying to help readers find the information they want all in one place |
