Edithistory:David Evans Shaw
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| 1308463138 | 2025-08-29T16:30:20Z | Profberger | /* Conservation activities and activism */ |
| 1308463068 | 2025-08-29T16:29:52Z | Profberger | /* Conservation activities and activism */ |
| 1308439172 | 2025-08-29T13:35:20Z | Citation bot | Altered template type. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by Лисан аль-Гаиб | [[Category:AfC pending submissions by age/0 days ago]] | #UCB_Category 7/135 |
| 1308244014 | 2025-08-28T09:59:47Z | Profberger | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1308243910 | 2025-08-28T09:58:31Z | Profberger | This was an extensive edit attempting to meet editors requests. It includes the removal of peacock terms and a reduction in references, focusing on critical public news sites and organizations. It removes extraneous information that might seem more appropriate in a CV and tries to bring the submission more in line with an Encyclopaedic style |
| 1305166221 | 2025-08-10T12:42:43Z | MediaKyle | Declining submission: npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone |
| 1305165441 | 2025-08-10T12:35:48Z | Profberger | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1305165389 | 2025-08-10T12:35:20Z | Profberger | made numerous small edits and changes to ensure this submission attempts to meet the comments and criticisms of previous editors. The whole has been considerably shortened and a number of cross references have been added. References are hopefully in line with mainstream media and trusted sources. |
| 1302422694 | 2025-07-25T08:58:09Z | Ldm1954 | |
| 1302422351 | 2025-07-25T08:54:21Z | Profberger | /* Business career */ added us news reference for IDEXX |
| 1302421843 | 2025-07-25T08:48:23Z | Profberger | /* Business career */ |
| 1302421433 | 2025-07-25T08:43:04Z | Profberger | Added Euraka alert reference |
| 1302420596 | 2025-07-25T08:32:17Z | Profberger | added several media and mainstream news references to article |
| 1302417246 | 2025-07-25T07:50:35Z | Profberger | Added first spouse |
| 1300251085 | 2025-07-13T05:38:42Z | Profberger | added film producer to "known for" as he was executive producer for the Oscar winning movie Albert Nobbs |
| 1300250810 | 2025-07-13T05:34:44Z | Profberger | Continuing edits to bring the submission into form. Removed two repeated sentences. |
| 1300177330 | 2025-07-12T18:32:10Z | Ldm1954 | Declining submission: npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone |
| 1300173754 | 2025-07-12T18:00:36Z | DannyS712 bot | Task 3: Disable the categories on this page while it is still a draft, per [[WP:DRAFTNOCAT]]/[[WP:USERNOCAT]] |
| 1300155594 | 2025-07-12T15:37:05Z | Profberger | Added categeries |
| 1300155442 | 2025-07-12T15:35:48Z | Profberger | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1300155396 | 2025-07-12T15:35:25Z | Profberger | |
| 1300154478 | 2025-07-12T15:29:17Z | Profberger | Have edited down significantly to conform with being written in a neutral voice in the style of an Encyclopaedia. Have focused references on newspaper articles, journalistic websites and academic news articles from significant organizations such as the AAAS and Universities to establish the profile of this individual. I have noted his celebrity and his association and partnerships with well known celebrities recognized on wikipedia such as actors Glen Close and Goldie Hawn |
| 1298090361 | 2025-06-30T12:25:47Z | Antured | Fixed cite errors. |
| 1298038136 | 2025-06-30T04:04:25Z | Citation bot | Altered website. Added duplicate_title. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by LeapTorchGear | #UCB_webform 216/911 |
| 1297974303 | 2025-06-29T18:47:59Z | Vanilla Wizard | Declining submission: bio - Submission is about a person not yet shown to meet notability guidelines and npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]]) |
| 1297972037 | 2025-06-29T18:26:40Z | Vanilla Wizard | is that meant to say 2000? |
| 1297971766 | 2025-06-29T18:23:43Z | Vanilla Wizard | /* Public Service and Academia */ The 1 thing this source is here to verify - his involvement with the Maine Medical Center - is not verified by this source (the term Maine Medical Center is never mentioned in the source) |
| 1297930752 | 2025-06-29T12:25:34Z | Profberger | /* Business Career */ removed "and others" |
| 1297930638 | 2025-06-29T12:24:40Z | Profberger | /* Education */ corrected citation |
| 1297930240 | 2025-06-29T12:20:41Z | Profberger | /* Education */ added date and citation to Main College of the Arts degree |
| 1297929154 | 2025-06-29T12:09:45Z | Profberger | /* Public Service and Academia */ |
| 1297929084 | 2025-06-29T12:09:04Z | Profberger | /* Public Service and Academia */ added his appointment by President Barack Obama in order to make the paragraph more encyclopaedic, and corrected grammar in paragraph |
| 1297928542 | 2025-06-29T12:04:13Z | Profberger | clarified reasons for receipt of Honorary Doctorates |
| 1297816868 | 2025-06-28T18:11:11Z | Profberger | /* Films,Books and the Arts */ altered opening sentence structure to not repeat words in second sentence |
| 1297816706 | 2025-06-28T18:09:49Z | Profberger | /* Conservation Activities and Activism */ removed grammatical error |
| 1297779676 | 2025-06-28T12:46:12Z | Profberger | /* Films,Books and the Arts */ added period after sentence |
| 1297779408 | 2025-06-28T12:43:09Z | Profberger | Minor corrections to references and links |
| 1297776742 | 2025-06-28T12:09:43Z | KylieTastic | clean up ([[User:Novem Linguae/Scripts/DraftCleaner.js|DraftCleaner]]) |
| 1297776712 | 2025-06-28T12:09:15Z | KylieTastic | IMDB is not a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] see [[WP:IMDB]] |
| 1297750371 | 2025-06-28T07:17:51Z | Profberger | /* Public Service and Academia */ deleted repeated sentence |
| 1297750264 | 2025-06-28T07:16:43Z | Profberger | Brought article in line with other biographies of prominent business figures, philanthropists and notable people. Included more neutral citable references per suggestions. Cleaned up edits and fixed repetition and minor editorial errors. Corrected titles and Shaw's contributions/involvement based on new references. |
| 1297746090 | 2025-06-28T06:47:32Z | Citation bot | Altered title. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by Eastmain | #UCB_webform 59/314 |
| 1297702682 | 2025-06-27T23:25:50Z | Profberger | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1297702491 | 2025-06-27T23:23:45Z | Profberger | added citation to honorary doctorate |
| 1297701744 | 2025-06-27T23:16:36Z | Profberger | Added several neutral references. Removed individual board member of companies, reduced reliance on company press releases and removed most references |
| 1297672071 | 2025-06-27T18:54:34Z | Profberger | Added more neutral references beyond press releases, corrected term "trustee" to "board member" for the AAAS |
| 1297334656 | 2025-06-25T14:52:24Z | Profberger | I have added additional references to make the references more varied. I have attempted to make the language more neutral and encyclopaedic. |
| 1297309481 | 2025-06-25T11:05:22Z | MediaKyle | Declining submission: npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]]) |
| 1297016274 | 2025-06-23T17:59:34Z | Citation bot | Alter: title, template type. Added newspaper. Removed parameters. Some additions/deletions were parameter name changes. | [[:en:WP:UCB|Use this bot]]. [[:en:WP:DBUG|Report bugs]]. | Suggested by Лисан аль-Гаиб | #UCB_webform 359/500 |
| 1296976111 | 2025-06-23T12:39:43Z | Profberger | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1296975804 | 2025-06-23T12:37:33Z | Profberger | removed "Patron of the Arts" |
| 1296974945 | 2025-06-23T12:30:55Z | Profberger | Created more neutral voice per recommendations. Removed extraneous promotions that might be seen as puffery. Additional minor edits |
| 1296868300 | 2025-06-22T20:27:36Z | Profberger | /* Personal life */Removed familial associations |
| 1296868188 | 2025-06-22T20:26:31Z | Profberger | /* Public and Academic Service */Removed any sentences or statements that could be viewed as “puffery” |
| 1296867871 | 2025-06-22T20:23:47Z | Profberger | /* Business and Investment Career */Removed “puffery” or statements that might be seen as such such as company employee numbers and cost at sale |
| 1296867389 | 2025-06-22T20:19:29Z | Profberger | |
| 1296810100 | 2025-06-22T12:24:41Z | Ldm1954 | Declining submission: npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone ([[WP:AFCH|AFCH]]) |
| 1296809862 | 2025-06-22T12:22:11Z | Ldm1954 | Added {{[[Template:Cleanup rewrite|Cleanup rewrite]]}}, {{[[Template:Resume-like|Resume-like]]}}, and {{[[Template:Overly detailed|Overly detailed]]}} tags |
| 1296658372 | 2025-06-21T11:32:20Z | Profberger | Profberger moved page [[Draft:David Shaw]] to [[Draft:David Evans Shaw]] |
| 1296658068 | 2025-06-21T11:28:52Z | Profberger | added veterinarian reference under business |
| 1296595003 | 2025-06-21T00:13:45Z | Chippla360 | Bold text on full name |
| 1296567128 | 2025-06-20T19:50:13Z | RichBot | ([[WP:BOT|Beep, Boop]]). I have removed a template which is not valid in Draftspace |
| 1296567088 | 2025-06-20T19:49:55Z | Destinyokhiria | Destinyokhiria moved page [[User:Profberger/sandbox]] to [[Draft:David Shaw]]: Preferred location for [[WP:AFC|AfC]] submissions |
| 1296561442 | 2025-06-20T19:00:59Z | Profberger | fixed link problems in references |
| 1296560881 | 2025-06-20T18:55:59Z | Profberger | Submitting using [[WP:AFCSW|AfC-submit-wizard]] |
| 1296560068 | 2025-06-20T18:48:33Z | Profberger | Created page for public figure, entrepreneur, investor and philanthropist David Evans Shaw |
